|Reviews for Live, Die, Repeat|
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/9
Ozpin's training from hell sold me on the story.
| intata chapter 17 . 4/16
OK, you totally lost me with that whole insanity with Neo. I was following everything until that. I'm confused on so many levels, and I'm having so much trouble keeping anything straight.
I can't even finish this last chapter. I just don't understand where it comes from. It feels like I'm picking up a story from 5 chapters later, and no details click in my head until I understand that connection.
| A Petty Theif chapter 3 . 4/14
Funny enough, Juan Carlos is my cousins name
| lovedalton chapter 17 . 4/11
Dear God please stop not killing him
| GenderBender25 chapter 17 . 2/20
Hey I get it with the whole will to write thing. I currently have 4 paragraphs of a new story written that was supposed to be out by December.
The story is banging so if you feel up to it, I'd much like to read more of it.
| GenderBender25 chapter 14 . 2/20
| GenderBender25 chapter 12 . 2/19
Yes it is all Yang's fault
| GenderBender25 chapter 11 . 2/19
... well that happened
| GenderBender25 chapter 10 . 2/19
Oh my goodness I cant believe you took a whole *scene* from the Dark Knight. I think I'm in love
| GenderBender25 chapter 6 . 2/19
What... was that
| GenderBender25 chapter 4 . 2/18
| GenderBender25 chapter 2 . 2/18
You have no idea how much I enjoyed the training montage. All it was missing was Eye of the Tiger
| Stormlighter chapter 11 . 1/5
"What's that? You're fading out." "Whoa! We've broken to many records!" "We can't hear you through all of this box office money!" *Laughing* *Sigh* "Shawarma!"
| VA23 chapter 17 . 12/9/2020
very enjoyable story. I look forward to reading more.
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/29/2020