Ozpin's training from hell sold me on the story.

OK, you totally lost me with that whole insanity with Neo. I was following everything until that. I'm confused on so many levels, and I'm having so much trouble keeping anything straight.

I can't even finish this last chapter. I just don't understand where it comes from. It feels like I'm picking up a story from 5 chapters later, and no details click in my head until I understand that connection.

Funny enough, Juan Carlos is my cousins name

Dear God please stop not killing him

Hey I get it with the whole will to write thing. I currently have 4 paragraphs of a new story written that was supposed to be out by December.
The story is banging so if you feel up to it, I'd much like to read more of it.

Damn Neo

Yes it is all Yang's fault

... well that happened

Oh my goodness I cant believe you took a whole *scene* from the Dark Knight. I think I'm in love

What... was that

What the..?

You have no idea how much I enjoyed the training montage. All it was missing was Eye of the Tiger

"What's that? You're fading out." "Whoa! We've broken to many records!" "We can't hear you through all of this box office money!" *Laughing* *Sigh* "Shawarma!"

very enjoyable story. I look forward to reading more.

Fucking amazing