"The concept is simple," Ozpin concluded lightly, "If you can dodge a wrench... you can dodge a claw."

Lollll

2 Peter 3:9

they have manga!?

truly what and ending. really goes to show what an author you are doing it like this, just eye opening stuff.

this is a surprisingly good story. pacing is good, jaune's semblance isn't overpowered in a normal sense and I really like how he still needs to work for his success. the scene in Ozpin's office after the docks was brilliant. Certainly will read once more and will wait for more.

This story reminds me why I rarely read rwby these days. It's not your fault though, you're portraying them just like their cannon selves. I just don't like the characters, and not even Jaune can save rwby from well, team rwby's shit characters.

I kind of wish the story was written with a more serious tone.

You need to update this man, so criminal to leave this one hanging

Bro, You do not know how quick I was from chucking this story out of a five story window when Neo was about to rape him. I thought he would go full on submissive mode and sensitive like some stories do when the Male main character gets scarred for life in that way.

But you phenomenally surpassed my expectations.

Also, your tripping if you think this deserves to be in the K-T rating. Lol.

This story is amazing, and a marginally different way from the manga/anime/light novel Re: Zero and the manwha SSS Rank Suicide Hunter. Well done. And you made me like Jaune's character!? That's a feat no mere man can accomplish.

Well now. That got dark. Incredibly fast I might add. I mean damn. This story is supposed to be rated K-T...

You did not just have Blake seethe out "Seven days..." Lol.

Its impressive that you made this story so much like Re:Zero yet haven't stolen any of the iconic moments from it or even mentioned it. It's like its floating by itself as something separate entirely.

"And sorry about the love trap, Jauney-boy. We still cool, 'kay?"

Alternative Response:

Jaune shook his head. "Don't sweat it. I'm actually used to getting beat up by women. Hath no fury like a woman scorned and all that."

I'm terrified by how much I like Jaune's character in this. Send help.

This was a fun read so far. I hope you update it sometime soon in the future.