|Reviews for The Last Word|
| maniacalmuse chapter 1 . 6/15
I found this on the Red-Eyed Edward Contest page, and was blown away by how succinct a story you told in just over 300 words. Then imagine my surprise when I came here to review it and add it to my favs, only to find a huge continuation to go with it! Wow! I look forward to digging in to the rest. XO
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/16
for like 10 chapters now bella has been starting and stopping and starting and stopping her story...all this is ...is complete fucking garbage
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/16
Bella said that she knows a bad man when she sees one...LMFAO. Let me guess, being in prison with WOMEN taught her how to tell the bad men apart from the good ones? LOL Cause by her own admission, Jamie played her for a fool and she had NO FUCKING CLUE he was a bad man. And she said that Edward had a beautiful soul...LOL even though hes covered in human blood cause he just killed some guards.
So ya, that doesn't really make sense does it?
Did Edward really say that he sodomized a man for three hours? He fucked his ass for three hours? WOW your really fucked up huh?
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/15
What is with their dialogue? Its just fucking ramblings about nothing!
Get to the motherfucking point already. Cunts in there for murder and shes all "Edward?, heheh tee heee heeee I forgot...Edward? haha he hehehehe nevermind" Shes fucking retarded. And Edward is SUPPOSED to be a human killer ya? Well THAT was the perfect time to kill bella! THe end.
That's all there is.
Edward eats at a jail because...who knows and who cares
Bella is on death row for murder
Shes really stupid and annoying
Edward kills the dumb bitch
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/15
You sure said a lot to say so little. I much prefer concise writing but whatever.
So Edward eats at a prison...well that's...not interesting. Its kind of stupid and unnecessary actually.
| Oneway2011 chapter 30 . 2/25
Weeping! Salvation experience always get to me. It was hard when Bella died ( I’m still human) but I’m glad I persisted. Great ending, God’s love through Christ knows no limits. At the same time, it identifies God plan to bring His end is some times painful. I am in the middle on one now and have had a few “Bella 31 day episodes” thought fortunately mine only last a few hours
You are wonderful and I love WHWD and Serinity Prayer also. Thank you, your brother in Christ.
| alice'sbella chapter 30 . 11/15/2017
This is really beautiful!
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/6/2017
Satisfying but too fast!
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/6/2017
I honestly don't know what to say any more, but still trust you.
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/6/2017
I have faith in you.
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/6/2017
The suspense once again is awful, but you are good.
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/5/2017
When will the torture end?
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/5/2017
Of course you are trusted to bring this to a satisfactory end, you are YOU.
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/5/2017
I think you are still a genius.
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/5/2017
Love your imagination.