Reviews for Last of the Spider-Clan
OniTenshi500 chapter 1 . 2/11
Heads up, a YouTube channel did your fic and didn't credit you, and it looks like they're claiming it their original work.

www youtube com watch?v5_BwYMm0PIM
Guest chapter 25 . 2/9
“I only know Paka for a day and a half but if anything happens to him, i will kill everyone in this room then myself”
-Anko Mitarashi, probably

Joke aside, this fic is absolutely amazing,spectacular,sensational, ultimate even, i really hope that you would continue it
Guest chapter 25 . 2/9
I pray that your doing alright FrivoulousThought, hope you continue this fic some day
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2023
“Pīta, what are you doing?”

“Hey Lois, I’m a Ninja of the hidden leaf!”
Guest chapter 25 . 9/3/2023
Besides, Pīta is not dark and grey as Kakashi and Sasuke and even though pita states he would kill if he have completely no choices, he would still not be fitting to learn chidori, because he still don't have enough killing intent to learn it, chidori is a move that is designed to kill, not neutralize. Saving people is Pita main motive, killing is the very thing that he tries to avoid with his whole being if possible, so Pita absolutely wouldn't have what it takes to learn chidori
Its like having spider-man carrying a fucking bloody chainsaw like leather face or a machine gun like Rambo or something
Guest chapter 25 . 9/3/2023
To gontheone: Making pīta learn chidori or sage mode is like making spider-man able to shoot heat vision like superman or have claw like wolverine or having dr manhattan power, thats some straight OOC,in name only gary stu dogshit
gontheone chapter 25 . 8/26/2023
Hey just read this story. Have to say it often take turns I did not expect.

By all means I am simply Amazed of this Story. The pacing, the forthcoming of the plot and so on. Its just Amazing. Pun intended.

I am curious what Pītā will learn. But what I do not understand is why he isn’t allowed by you to learn Sage mode or Chidori. Yes Chidori may not be his style but the argume that, this is Sasukes move is not great in my opinion. Cause The rasengan is Narutos, still Jiraya used it, konohamaru, and even Kakashi knew it. I mean it would be cool if he learns it and only used it as last means. Like as ace in an hopeless situation.
And same with Sage Mode. It isn’t Naruto thing. Cause Kabuto, Jiraya, Hashirama and later Madara all used it.

I don’t say he shall use it instantly but as a last mean to make him sorr of even with Naruto and Sasuke SO6P.
zrueieja chapter 17 . 8/18/2023
Can’t wait to see more of this. This is bound to be good stories 3
Guest chapter 25 . 8/18/2023
Guest chapter 25 . 8/2/2023
Hope you update it soon. It'll be interesting to see how the marvel world will react to throw ninjas and the new and 𝗶𝗺𝗽𝗿𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗱 𝘀𝗽𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗿𝗺𝗮𝗻 ?!
Guest chapter 25 . 7/25/2023
zaru's fic are better than this one? what a load of bullshit...
Guest chapter 25 . 7/21/2023
To the other guest: not much people complaining here but you dude,you cant satisfy everyone you know? If you not satisfied with his story then just shut up and go read something else
Guest chapter 21 . 7/12/2023
So it is Julia
Guest chapter 16 . 7/12/2023
A whole lot of throwing shit in the air with the romance stuff... Just do some fun things already. Otherwise, why bother with this kind of stuff so early?

With the jealousy of Pīta and Sakura thing. With the Temari taking interest in Pīta thing. With the Anko and Kakashi thing.

Ain't good to leave people to build their own expectations. Cause some people don't take kindly to being disappointed as seen on a lot of fanfiction... Shocker, I know.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/11/2023
Im not really enjoying the obvious intention of keeping Pīta away from the team. It was clear the moment ya had him separate and fight the Sinister Trio. But now it's just annoying.
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