Reviews for Last of the Spider-Clan
BrawlerGamer chapter 20 . 8/27/2018
Don't know what Dosu is planning but he's forgotten one important flaw when he stole Pīta's design. The boy came up with the idea for that, he can easily think of a way to destroy it to prevent it from being used in the wrong hands.

I'm hoping for the next encounter between Pīta and Mikio to end differently. Heck, a big part of me is hoping that Mikio gets overconfident because of his last encounter with the young Spider and underestimates him. Hopefully, with the one month of training, Kakashi will be able to teach his student some new tricks. And since Anko isn't one to give up easily once her mind is set on something, it wouldn't hurt if she snuck and taught Pīta a thing or two in the shadows.

But I see that, aside from Lady Tsunade, Jiraiya has returned, as well as someone I think, is clearly, your version of Madame Webb. Kakashi may be able deny Anko, but even he has to admit that Pīta being taught by someone who can properly show him how to control his powers is better than merely being taught, "Basic Shinobi Arts"
Suzululu4moe chapter 7 . 8/27/2018
Hmm so did Sasori become Doctor Octopus like photo become Tobi? Or had he beee. Replaced by octopus? Or did sasori exist elsewhere in the series ?

Hmm makes me wonder if deifara’s is going to replace teh green goblins given their flying bomb dropping antics .

Likewise Kisame and that alligator man in Spider-Man .
Suzululu4moe chapter 6 . 8/27/2018
Nice ending to the wave arc.
Suzululu4moe chapter 5 . 8/27/2018
Lol. Naked unmasked kakashi . It’s amz no one jumped him yet . His looks were the only one in the series to have turned both men n women to him

Ahah midnight antics .

Though I hope naruto isn’t paired up with his stalker Hinata . She stalks him around the village and let’s get him abused m bullies and never interfering or trying to befriend him. What hinata did was to enjoy the sight of him enduring the suffering . like a sick pervert. I remember a CSI episode or one of those crime drama where a man purposely married a woman because he loved seeing the scars of physical torture n abuse left on teh woman by his favorite psychopath. Would you let someone like that date a close companion on real life? I know I won’t .
Suzululu4moe chapter 4 . 8/26/2018
Ouch when kakashi gets serious about teaching. Though I wouldn’t be surprised if the clan kids already had heir parents give similar lessons via livestock or their signature clan Justus . Or actual prisoners that have a death sentence.
Brave2000 chapter 20 . 8/26/2018
i love how you give secondary characters such as kin and dosu background and actual character arcs that the manga and anime didnt bother with giving them. i would have never thought i would actually like the dosu character yet you did it. you have talent man. keep up the good work!
Suzululu4moe chapter 3 . 8/26/2018
Lol naruto’s admittance of how he dreams of Sakura usually .

Nice battle scene n team bonding. Though I wonder how kakashi will train the team now that he knows they have teamwork down.
CRUDEN chapter 20 . 8/26/2018
So your using Julia instead of Cassandra
I do wonder what is pita nature chakra my guess is that it is water
Suzululu4moe chapter 2 . 8/26/2018
Hm I wonder what the other teams are like . And if Peter had any friends outside of Sakura and maybe ino .
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
I like the childhood friends angle and the fact that he is twelve. N the cute comment. I like the banter between teh duo. Ahah the arm grip. Irony is she is one of the few in teh world wo could eventually rival his physical strength.

Well one other option had been if he had accidentally gotten bitten by a spider that had escaped from a sterile male mutated orochimaru’s underground lab .
FireDragonSpider-Mane6 chapter 20 . 8/26/2018
This chapter was filled with such tender moments. Pita calling Mei mom just feels right and her barb at the infamous Paka luck was delightful. Although i just know that the frequency amplifier is gonna be pain in his ass. It's nice to see Anko has taken such a vested interest in Pita and her teaching him a thing or two would present so many opportunities for nonsensical banter. Pita and Scorpion that whole destiny and fate thing well it certainly showed a little more of how he thinks, it's gonna be grand when they battle. The whole thing with Pita and his Nindo i believe you'll be faithful to while also staying true to the path of the ninja. The interaction between Pita and Sakura talking and consoling each other in their shortcomings was rather sweet and heartfelt. The exchange with Pita Sakura and Naruto naming his rogue gallery was cool. Naruto and Sasuke arguing went about as well i would expect and would i be correct in assuming Kakashi was requested to teach Sasuke.
It was nice to see Ino told Pita about what Dosu did and having them trade barbs with one another. Woooohoooo yes i see you finally brought in Madam Juria Kapenta Nice finish.

Ps: The Koizumi-Clan was this your version of the Kravinoff family?
coldblue2015 chapter 20 . 8/26/2018
Thanks for updating and this was a great chapter!

Expect for the Questions/Suggestions of this chapter to be PM to you!

Mei Paka:

Interesting start of chapter! She sort of a civilian still, but it great to read Mei to actually know about Spider Clan and sort of see how she reacts to it. She the closest thing to a mother than anyone is, but she does not have a child of her own. I wonder, why does not Mei Paka have children? Well, she must have been a Kounchi in her past line of work or was born sterile. Anyway, she proud of her family and the Clan she apart of. Always remembering her dear husband with kind regards, but also leaves a interesting notice for possible issues Mei might have with Pita biological uncle. Mei and Pita dialgoue was great and it really showed a mother-son dialogue. I'm glad Mei Paka is really important support character in this story.

Dosu Kinuta and Kin Tsuchi:

Man, they may be Villains in the story, but just great to read about them. We get a really good idea on who they are and their relationship as teammates. I have to admit, their kind of a intimacy between the two that could be sexual/romantic. Still, both characters are damaged and traumatize in a way that lead them to the Hidden Sound Village and have been manipulated by Orochimaru. Not anymore. Their eyes are open and they want to become something more. The MOST Shinobi/Ninja thing for this chapter was Dosu and Kin breaking into Pita home to figure out their enemy. They are confused about Pita, but Dosu has surprising amount of high Intelligence and empathy to understand Pita Paka. Kin hates how much comfort and security that Konoha has, but is uncomfortable with Pita heroic with saving her and Dosu from Uchiha Sasuke. Now, it seems that Pita Paka REJECTED applications of Science Projects that were using Sound or Ultra Frequency with become Dosu and Kin weapon. It really good to read. Dosu will have a SUPRISING weapon that Pita will know and hopefully compliment the Melody Gauntlet.

Kakashi Hatake and Anko Mitarashi:

Okay, I have to admit they do come off as couple/pairing feel around those two interaction. It does not help with Anko flirtation or Kakashi putting his hands on her hips. Okay, so are protective of Pita Paka. We even find out from Kakashi that Paka clan had a FAMOUS Nindo using with 'great power comes great responsibility', but Kakashi does notice that Pita takes in the bad more than the good of his responsibilities. Anko reveals a deep care and concern with Pita, revealing someone who can't be tainted by Orochimaru. It really interesting how Kakashi probably going to give the OK for Anko to train Pita. Thank god they actually were watching out for Pita with a surprising visit of Mikio, playing his hold psychological attack.


His will is the OLD nature of Shinobi in "Naruto", during the first, second and third Shinobi Wars. We find out that the Scorpion and Spider Clans bad blood started off about a century ago and was the sign of Spider Clan dwindling down in numbers/power. It rather interesting to read that Mikio is SO CONFIDENT in killing Pita that he wants to understand his 'prey' before he kills the last Spider. It rather hard for Mikio to intimidate or to put fear in Pita Paka. Pita should fear Mikio, but he doesn't. In some strange way, Mikio probably wants to understand the LAST bit of Clan connecting to the Scorpion and Spiders before he kills that last piece of his identity. Does Mikio hate Scorpions and being a Scorpion, so that he has need to kill Spider to reflect that? Anyway, Saidai is scared for life and will most likely want a piece of Pita for messing up his face and blowing his chances with Temari-chan.

Sakura Haruna

It rather interesting to read Pita deal with that. Both of them are not quiet ready for the Chunin Exams, but they want to grow stronger. Sakura felt that this was a huge let down for her team and this communicating truthfully with each other. Sakura and Pita have a close bond that is very much a CLOSE relationship of childhood friends. Sort of like siblings in some regards, but also like romantic interest. They support each other very well. Ha! We have Naruto bring in the names of Electro and Mysterio to Mikio team, given that it is funny and hilarious to name Pita Paka enemies that way.

Naruto Uzumaki and Sasuke Uchiha:

Well, they are prepping to deal with FINALS of the Chunin Exams, so it interesting to read their interaction. Pita connected with these two shinobi, but Naruto and Sasuke will have that bond with each other. It really interesting. Naruto is a good teammate to have, but Sasuke just thinking about enemies he has to fight in the future. They both shape each other to grow stronger in ways, so it interesting to read how Pita Paka being thrown in the mix that changes everything.

Ino Yamanaka:

Well, it was interesting to read how Ino perspective on Pita. It like she so afraid of him, but also that he so warm and a nce guy. Ino gives us a a bit of Civilians perspective, but it interesting to read Shinobi Clan idea. Ino acts like a normal girl, even if she from Shinobi Clan. I'm glad that Ino is actually trying to help Pita Paka out with Dosu Kinuta involved with fight with Saidai. She can't go to Jonin Sensei, because she has no evidence of to support such claim. Ino saw ALOT of good in Pita during the Forest of Death, so she wants to grow a bit as person just as Pita seems change as well.

Hiruzen Sarutobi/Third Hokage:

Well, he just go a blast from the past. He dealing with alot of shitty situations. He already knows that the Chunin Exams is bad idea, but alot of Politics and Military decisions sort put Hiruzen into t tight spot. He really cares for the next generation of Shinobi. Now Jiraiya has appeared, his loyal student. Along the way we even get Juria coming BACK from the dead. Juria or the fourth student has the Madam Web look, but also has feeling of Dare Devil mixed with here are about to get awesome!

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!

Again, expect Questions/Suggestions in a PM for you sometime in the future!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/26/2018
so I see madam web is returning, looks like things are going to get intreasting, as always with this story, keep up the great work.
HaywireEagle chapter 20 . 8/26/2018
Madame Web. Kusana?(Cassandra) Something Daiku? (Carpenter) Takumi?
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