Reviews for Last of the Spider-Clan
Brave2000 chapter 25 . 8/12/2019
aww yeah! it lives! amazing chapter!
FireDragonSpider-Mane6 chapter 25 . 8/12/2019
So your saying that the difficulty in controlling their chakra and complacency in the abilities they possessed prevent almost their entire Species from even trying to control chakra that would definitely contribute to the near extinction. Pita-tingle hahaha so funny nice reference. Pita is already fighting on water nice and it's all in conjunction with his Spider Sense when he learns Way of the Spider he is gonna be a force to be reckoned with. Red Rose delightful such meaning. A sound weapon that absorbs all sound in a localized area in a quite and calm forest was able to kill all the fauna in the area and he wants to use it in a populated village during an invasion it's gonna be a blood bath. Though I do like how you have been fleshing out Dosu and Kin's characters giving a little more background. You don't do anything one dimensional. Pita has such a way with words even able to reach Lee of all people. A yellow rose such much meaning in such a small gesture. The little moments really drive this story home especially those between Pita and Sakura.
LoneWolf4299 chapter 25 . 8/12/2019
What a wonderful chapter!

Arc's for all the main kids of the story at the moment and it was not only well written, but you've shown us as readers that this is worth the wait. The Pita Tingle is a great reference to the movie and for Madam Juria's sake, she doesn't deal with the multiverse since if she ever meets Superior or the more tech-based Spider's, she'll flip. Naruto is growing in a way that brings me back to how I loved the OG series in the first place so Props to you my friend. Sakura getting time to shine was SPECTACULAR! Her feelings towards Pita growing little by little and their small moments are so pure and precious that you make me ship something that in any other way would make me question why even do it.

Sasuke and Dosu go for a more darker tone and I like that a lot given their character arcs so far.

For the mystery kid... I DON'T KNOW! For all we know, it could be Kid Thor or Kid Doctor Strange who managed to open portals! I'm so hyped for the next chapter! Keep going because this is Excelsior!

Side note: Their's a character in Marvel who came about recently called Seol Hee (Hero name - Luna Snow) who has Cytokinetic powers and is someone I think you can do a lot with her since she's similar to Haku. Just a thought.

Random: I think your Pita and MCU Peter would get along greatly though Madam Juria would be more aggravated that another version of Pita would distract her Pita with tech talk (I mean come on, the Iron Spider Suit alone would get non stop talking for days and that's before Wakanda tech).
InYuJi chapter 25 . 8/12/2019
as shoot. that sound bomb sounds so devastating. outs gonna suck that it doesn't do jack. love how Pita had to learn to let his spider sense guide in chakra application
Ant9472 chapter 25 . 8/12/2019
Another great Chapter. Its nice to see the Spider-Sense been used for something other than Danger detection. Its always been more of a extra sense for many things than just sensing danger. Anyway, good job on everything, can’t wait to read more.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2019
It may be too late, but dude please rethink that name. I love the concept behind the story, but I can’t get into a story about a main character named pita it’s making me hungry.
KorrieChan chapter 24 . 7/21/2019
Awesome story. When is the next update)? Are u still alive?
LoneWolf4299 chapter 24 . 6/16/2019
It's been a while but life gets in the way.
Great chapters, Love them
Hope you enjoyed everything Spider-Man related since I last contacted you that has come out since. And wonderful world building on your part.

I imagine the spiders and Madam Web being shocked when they find out Superior killed their God.
"Why?! Do you know what you've done?!" would be their response.

Quickie this time but keep writing because it's Excelsior!
MGStarFire chapter 2 . 6/8/2019
I've got a tip for for you and for "Pita Paka" if you want to help people don't become an assassin they tipically don't help people i don't know if you knew this.
stevesgaming87 chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
reading the summary of this convinced me this was crackfic... I mean come on you wapanesed his name and its pita lol... I want some flatbread now

pita paka picked a peck of pickled peppers
Mercwiththemouth chapter 24 . 5/21/2019
We have reached quite an important point in Pīta's life. The moment where he is unable to save someone no matter how hard he tries. While it is a horrible thing to happen to anyone, it is much worse for someone like Pīta who's only goal in life is to protect and help others. This chapter actually reminded me of many Spider-man issues where similar events have happened, like the comic book Spider-man, Pīta suffered regret of his actions, sadness at his failure, but is prepared to move past this event to better himself and be stronger so something like this doesn't happen again. You have once again proved you have an amazing understanding of Spider-man as a character.

And next chapter we can look forward to Pīta beginning his personal training, whether we see him learn of new abilities or of a way to enhance his current power set it is most definitely going to be a show.
Boink chapter 24 . 5/17/2019
Pīta almost pulled a Spider-Man No More there
Aztec 13 chapter 24 . 5/17/2019
I like this one, cause this chapter shows Pīta being most human having him second guess himself and his reason why he chose to become a ninja and he learns one of the lessons that all spider-men learns is that they can't always save everyone, but thanks this lesson it looks our spider ninja is ready to take his training seriously can't wait to see what happens next, will learn a new trick like Stingers popping out on his wrist like Kane , or well he but a new spider Gadget to use in the tournament like impact webbing and also glad you like the idea of the goblin being related to naruto the idea came to me when I realize that no one in the anime ever mentioned or ask dose he have any relatives of any kind like a grandparents, uncle or a aunt if so why keep them a secret from him,so that's where the idea of the goblin being related to him came from , what if the goblin did something so terrible and horrifying that the elders of village chose to keep the existence of him a secret from Naruto so he wouldn't be influence by him what you think?
Animeguy1101 chapter 24 . 5/18/2019
Gotta say I love the angle of Pita trying to be a Hero in world were he has to be a soldier to make the most difference, although putting it that way makes me want to see him meet this worlds version of Captain America if he was here. Especially doesn't help that this is old Japan basically, where things like suicide thru seppuku is considered an option for redemption and other things for honor.
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