|Reviews for Rise of the Whirling Tides|
| The Baz chapter 4 . 11/2
1 billion, I remember when that was a high bounty
| Ganish Tamil chapter 1 . 10/26
super stories i love it
| Ganish Tamil chapter 4 . 10/26
Nice store man i am learning from you lot
| Blackkirito chapter 47 . 10/25
2 questions 1:are you still alive and healthy and 2:who is the dark king
| Makimass chapter 7 . 10/21
Great, a child oc love interest. Jesus christ.
| Makimass chapter 4 . 10/21
Why have the others have chakra? They are not shinobi? They should learn Haki instead lol
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/13
Getting bored, too much info. won't read more
| thiagopds13 chapter 1 . 10/12
Summary "A lot of OCs" you forgot to tell that the MC is an OC as well...
| TheBlakkat09 chapter 46 . 10/10
You haven't updated in over three years man. If you don't want to write anymore then just say so don't leave us in suspense. I still like your work though. Please update if your still alive and well.
| bumblebee9432 chapter 46 . 9/12
is it an old Kabuto? is Kabuto Rayleigh?
| reaperofages chapter 46 . 9/7
have really enjoyed this fic and hope that you will continue it keep up the great work
| housejan47 chapter 45 . 9/5
Is the story dead?I hope not
Really curious who this father guy is
| not a fan chapter 1 . 8/28
I honestly haven't read half of the first chapter without saying "this sucks" before deciding it wasn't worth spending my time reading this...
it's supposed to be a story where naruto is in the world of one piece right? well, not even 1/4 of the first chapter and he's no longer naruto...
why the hell did you have to put a doujutsu on it? or change her hair? or the way naruto dressed? Honestly, if you wanted to do a story with an OC named Naruto, say he's an OC and don't pretend he's Naruto...
honestly, when people put a doujutsu on naruto like that, why is it not a doujutsu that makes sense and is well explained or is it not worth it...
if it had merged with kaguya, the normal thing would have been the Byakugan that Kaguya has for that and not the rinne sharingan crap...
also the fact that it can recover all the memories of people who have been transformed into zetsu... those memories are no longer there, they cannot be absorbed...
then sink the entire continent even before knowing how to use his new powers, but not destroy the island where his clan has lived despite being in the middle of the continent...
certainly one of the few stories that has made me abandon it without even having finished reading the first chapter...
whoever reads this, if you don't dislike an OC called naruto even though you're here for Naruto in one piece, go ahead and try to read this... for me it's a waste of time
just keeping naruto as naruto (even with some minor changes to show that if he has merged with kaguya) i still would have given this story a chance
| Sarbotrik15 chapter 47 . 8/23
its a really good story please continue it
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/8
Naruto is an overpowered Gary-Stu. Also, you keep reiterating how he has all the Shinobi worlds memories, but he uses like 5ish people.