| Reviews for Rise of the Whirling Tides |
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   Makimass chapter 7 . 10/21/2022 Great, a child oc love interest. Jesus christ. |
| Makimass chapter 4 . 10/21/2022 Why have the others have chakra? They are not shinobi? They should learn Haki instead lol |
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/13/2022 Getting bored, too much info. won't read more |
| lRayzerl chapter 1 . 10/12/2022 Summary "A lot of OCs" you forgot to tell that the MC is an OC as well... |
| TheBlakkat09 chapter 46 . 10/10/2022 You haven't updated in over three years man. If you don't want to write anymore then just say so don't leave us in suspense. I still like your work though. Please update if your still alive and well. |
| bumblebee9432 chapter 46 . 9/12/2022 is it an old Kabuto? is Kabuto Rayleigh? |
| reaperofages chapter 46 . 9/7/2022 have really enjoyed this fic and hope that you will continue it keep up the great work |
| housejan47 chapter 45 . 9/5/2022 Is the story dead?I hope not Really curious who this father guy is |
| not a fan chapter 1 . 8/28/2022 I honestly haven't read half of the first chapter without saying "this sucks" before deciding it wasn't worth spending my time reading this... it's supposed to be a story where naruto is in the world of one piece right? well, not even 1/4 of the first chapter and he's no longer naruto... why the hell did you have to put a doujutsu on it? or change her hair? or the way naruto dressed? Honestly, if you wanted to do a story with an OC named Naruto, say he's an OC and don't pretend he's Naruto... honestly, when people put a doujutsu on naruto like that, why is it not a doujutsu that makes sense and is well explained or is it not worth it... if it had merged with kaguya, the normal thing would have been the Byakugan that Kaguya has for that and not the rinne sharingan crap... also the fact that it can recover all the memories of people who have been transformed into zetsu... those memories are no longer there, they cannot be absorbed... then sink the entire continent even before knowing how to use his new powers, but not destroy the island where his clan has lived despite being in the middle of the continent... certainly one of the few stories that has made me abandon it without even having finished reading the first chapter... whoever reads this, if you don't dislike an OC called naruto even though you're here for Naruto in one piece, go ahead and try to read this... for me it's a waste of time just keeping naruto as naruto (even with some minor changes to show that if he has merged with kaguya) i still would have given this story a chance |
| Sarbotrik15 chapter 47 . 8/23/2022 its a really good story please continue it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/8/2022 Naruto is an overpowered Gary-Stu. Also, you keep reiterating how he has all the Shinobi worlds memories, but he uses like 5ish people. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/8/2022 What's the point of long drawn out fight scenes in Naruto at this point is basically a demigod? Also, using pre established characters from other animals etc. Is lazy. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2022 Please continue |
| gauze000 chapter 5 . 5/11/2022 that was like, 6000 years ago, right? why is he being dramatic about it just now? is he so mentally challenged that he has delayed response that took 6000 years? |
| Scrawl the Penguin chapter 1 . 5/5/2022 I love this fix and was just about to rearead it again hoping for a new chapter soon after your recovery. I wish you well and hope that you get back to writing |