Reviews for Rise of the Whirling Tides |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 6 thousand years old, shinju jinchuuriki, gets hit and blindsided by a genin. Yeah..., not reading any more of that. |
![]() ![]() Realy. agod story keap going and dont do lemon any time sonn wait until 13 or so. and if you dont want to do limon di same lime and we contine in our imagination dont do a big harem it would get borning or turned to a sexstory. |
![]() ![]() Bonney, Koala, & Violet from the Dressrosa for the pairings |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't really read much narutoxonepiece crossovers but i realy like this one. keep it up. |
![]() ![]() I like your story, i recently startend reading one piece naruto crossover and yours is already one of my favourite i can't wait till The next chapter. Kepp your good work up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. I look forward to seeing where to take this when you reach cannon timeline. For pairings I really only care for Robin bing in it so I leave the rest in your capable hands. I look forward to more and hope to,see it before to long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do know that Fujitora came from Military draft after Marineford war. It is mentioned in Cannon. Otherwise he would have been in Marineford war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I personally think it's unessesary to have so many girls in his harem. Why need 10 when 3 or 4 is more reasonable. Other than that love the fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Epic chapter keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing, stunning fic so far. I am loving it. Truly unique. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fic is amazing one the best story's i have read plz keep it going |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few thoughts. First, I do not believe that Fujitora was part of the marines prior to the War of the Best. It sounds like he was drafted and immediately made an admiral since they were down 2 after the war (Sengoku retired and Aokiji quit), but the manga was not too clear about that. As for the girls, I think Vivi would be a good choice as I rather like her. An alliance between Naruto and Alabasta would work quite nicely too- he takes out Croc and Robin joins him at the same time as Vivi. The others could work, but I'm not sure how Nojiko would fit into it and we really do not know a lot about Bonney (I have heard many interesting theories though, so having her join could also work). |
![]() ![]() ![]() like the story so far will be interesting to see how it will interact with cannon lore later on in the time line like the char development so far will be fun to see where it will lead to hoping to see the reaction of the other players on the board to naruto's bounty in the next chapter |