Reviews for Rise of the Whirling Tides
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Dude, I just turned into a damn fanboy after reading the 1st chapter, I hope you take this story somewhere. ..For my sanity
DannyPhantom619 chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
Damn, if Whitebeard is the so called the World's Strongest Man then Naruto is the TRUE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM.

Also love that you included Koneko/Shirone and Kuroka from the DxD will take a liking to them.

Also FUCK the Foxy Pirates, Naruto is a TRUE
Kitsune.
Lucifer666Morningstar chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
love it
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
That was an excellent chapter, well done ;)
Shadowdragondanny chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
Can't wait 2 read the next one
Reishin Amara chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
huh..gotta admit nekoshou in one piece would make things interesting...nature chakra only they can use,and a nice parallel to haki but more diverse in use. plus imagine the feud with fishman
knightofgardevoir chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
i do like the addition of the neko sisters of dxd they are a good touch will you have them be able to learn senjustu like how their race can in dxd?
carwash36 chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
Nice chapter!
mightyvish chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
Awesome chapter.
carwash36 chapter 2 . 11/23/2015
YEEEESSSS! This sounds like a good story hope you update soon!
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 11/22/2015
...Non-canon Miss Bonnie Olive?
trainiel chapter 2 . 11/22/2015
Nice work! Btw could you maybe make an oc that has a devil fruit power of his own dimension like he can bring people in and out of it along with himself and its livable inside , and also he can shoot weapons from portals of the dimension
avatoa chapter 2 . 11/21/2015
This is an awesome story and you should be very proud of it! I am curious on how you plan to incorporate canon One Piece events with Naruto there. As for the harem, well, here is my thoughts on the first three canon choices:

First, Vivi. I think Vivi may be a little young for Naruto at her canon appearance due to his physical state and although I agree she is underused that is no excuse to be putting her with Naruto. I think Luffy fits the bill with her better although thanks to his Devil Fruit he'll never, how shall we say, be grown up enough for her.

Second, Nico Robin. A RobinxNaruto pairing is one of the most overused cliched plots in crossover fanfiction between these two series, but I can't deny that your reasoning is sound. Good luck with this pairing. You are going to need it.

Finally, we come to Boa Hancock. Now granted, she is considered to be the most beautiful women in the world, but let us not forget that due to her past and upbringing until canon catches up with her, she is a total man hating lesbian. Now thanks to the fifth season, however, although she still she has multiple problems, she has mellowed out some thanks to her crush on Luffy, but that is a subject of circumstance however. She only got that crush on Luffy due to two factors: 1.) He was unaffected by her beauty and thus immune to her Devil Fruit powers thus he treated her like an actual human being, instead of an object to be lusted after, which is a plus for any man seeking a relationship in a women. And 2.) Due to Luffy's practically selfless nature when it comes to his friends, he picked Margaret and her friends over a ship back to Saobaody, which basically literally bitch-slapped Hancock in the face and crumbled her views on men a little. That incident started opening her heart and to the idea of relationship with a man and since Luffy was the only guy in the vicinity at the time, she set her sights on him. Plus, since she is the only girl in the series that has shown even the slightest bit of romance towards the future King of the Pirates, I feel that Luffy should hook up with her because it adds more to both their characters. Now Naruto, on the other hand, can practically fulfill the second condition however he may have trouble on the first condition thanks to his teacher's influences as well as his eccetricities. Also, he might have inherited the perviness that a lot of the adults he knew were known for so he might not even be able to get a foot in the door with Hancock if develops a huge nosebleed by even looking at her. And don't try to deny or not make it happen cause that is just not a believeable situation when it comes to a meeting of these two characters.

So to sum it up, Vivi's too young to work with; Robin is completely overused but makes a lot of sense; and Hancock he has a half chance with, but not as good as Luffy.
GoGo44 chapter 2 . 11/21/2015
Please Update Soon This Seems To To Be Getting Interesting :D Ps What Happened To The Other Kids Will They Not Be Trained?
ligatto chapter 2 . 11/21/2015
Naruto learn to use Haki (3 types of haki)?
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