Awesome keep it up

the story is good it will be great if naruto could give bloodline limit to the kids ... and plz make hanckook in the harem ... i like story and i hope that you could give us a chapter or two in week

very good prologo.

Looks good so far. You need a bit of correcting on the punctuation though, but for now it's quite alright.

Wasn't the Shinobi world even a lot worse off than the One Piece world?

Keep it going I want to read more, the future chapters will be awesome, update soon.

wasn't the age of chakra absolute shite with war and death around every corner?

Awesome story but naruto uses the bijus power more than his own.. shouldn't he have like normal attacks for canon-fodder?

HELL YES! :D

great story. Any body from cannon as Naruto's apprentice? By the way could you try to make Naruto use the technique that the Sage did like summoning all the previous Kages?

Interesting fic I can't wait to see what happens next.

Looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

The only suggestion is to slow down and take your time. While not the most original concept, you've done excellently on its execution. Your grammar also is to be praised keep up the good work.

Interesting start, though I feel as though it's been a little bit rushed, a couple of spelling errors or grammar fumbles here and there didn't escape my notice.

Take your time is my suggestion, rushing things just causes problems and makes it feel more hectic.

continue this good story soon