hi how you have recovered from whatever was ailing you. are you going to be updating this fic or is it dead? its a very good read very few quality one piece crossover fics out there dont let this one die if you can help it. thanks

Firstly: whodaf... is davy jones (yes i shall not Google it)
secondly: Is the rimnesharigan on the forehead? cause then using the byakugan becomes tricky.

hiraishin can work without the knife but cause a lot chakra

you made this oc way too impossibly powerful. this 3 can practically beat special jounin and jounin. even the elite would have some trouble beating this 3.

I am sparing your lives, for the moment, but you cannot escape your fate. The hour of the fall of the world government will soon begin.(mewtwo, pokemon 1st movie).

Fight took way to dam long

man please give atleast two chapters it's already been 6 months after update

please give 2.0 as soon as possible

This has to be one of the best Naruto/One Piece Crossovers I have ever read. I can't wait to read 2.0.

I hope you are doing better and i hope the rewrits is going well. With all the new information on One Piece there will be lots of new dara to include in the next version. I look forward to its release.

get better

Whelp finished it liked and hope things go well for you man see you on the new fic

well, what u expect for a lazy ass like him. a bit of advice for all of u readers: if a story hasn't been updated in 18 months or more, then consider the story discontinued or the author's either forgot or dead.

Why? just why? it was getting good dammit. You haven't even made it to the main story yet.

I just binge read this in 3 days only to get the dreaded rewrite at the end.

Its the freiza saga all over again. Next time on dragon ball z
what felt like 5 years later the next episode come out.

I get it you feel you can improve things and you could be right, but wouldn't it be better to use those improvements to continue this tale then stating again from the top.

The story you are trying to weave is in a world so expansive that is original creator is not done telling it. Things will be missed stuff will go unexplained. But the important part of this is the journey.

Please consider continuing this as is.

If you do however restart anyway then you will need an antagonist much more powerful and cunning than the world government. They are simply no match for naruto's current power set. Nothing short of dr manhattan would be. And even then id give this naruto the edge.

good luck, can't wait.