Seems interesting needs updates though.

kaguya is dead...

Hi Yami ,
I wish u speedy recovery. I eagerly await the release of new chapters. I hope all the coming chapters are as fun as and action packed as one before. Angain i hope u get will soon.

It would be great if Narut wouldn't be so overpowered i the new version, even Naruto at the end of the war is stronger than any OP character, being an inmortal god is simply too much imo, that the mc has to struggle sometimes gives more emotion to a history.

It’s good to hear from you after so long. I can’t wait to see what you do with the rewrite. And please take care of yourself. Your health should come before this so no pressure

Hmm dunno... its okay i guess.
naruto dismissing haki for himself since he is strong enough in his eyes kind of deserves a big loss... not even trying it out and seeing thr effects etc. seems kinda...

the new enemy from the past thing seems kinda meh too... reason being a personal distaste for that kind if olot development. but except thise points the story is ok and writing quality high

The fighting damage is kinda biased... flowing msgms metling half his face... welp ok nerfed endurance to that of normal humans but still...

then a logiauser with negated devilfruit through water and add to it the element is a counter... and rasengsn which kinda shredded a metaltank... and he only has a shallow wound? even with haki which chakra kinda counters... at least a big hole would be logical

for clarification for the power comment before.
his powers should be godlike... and strengthwise the 4 emperors (kaido, big mom whitebeard) should be at mox hokage level if we scale it on narutostandart)

Hm a good starting power level kinda.

but with the preset of his background he should honestly be unable to be harmed that hard. and take no damage from the low level of strawberrys haki.
one piece power scaling is lower than the one from narutos world especially if you add kaguya and he should be stronger than her by now.
funny enough what we saw of kaguya was kinda low for her power set and she wasnt even a strong one from her clan.

At this point why don’t you just make the whole Naruto verse again.. hahaha

The currency is Berries
Not Belly

Por que se necesitan dos capítulos para una pelea y peor de unos oc qué no importaran en el futuro es un fanfic no un anime aki no hay grandes animaciones qué vuelvan entretenida la lucha por lo tanto en un fanfic las peleas no debería ser tan largas se vuelven aburridas

I just found this story, only to find out it is being rewritten at such a PIVOTAL MOMENT?!

I'm willing to bet that this "Father" is Kabuto. It makes the most sense to me for some reason.

Opinions on ROTWT
•Good story overall, the concept is interesting even if the execution sometimes is iffy
•Please check the spelling, even if it gets better over time, the amount of you’re, they’re etc…. (get a beta)
•There is a sheer amount of repetition of the same thing happening to the beginning of sentences in the first chapters, gets boring really fast
•I understand the want to go for shock factor with uzushio being clearly superior, but the stomps in the battle with big mom’s crew (the sweet commanders especially should not loose against some kids with 20 less years of battle experience) and the marines is making it boring
•No need to explain/translate a technique EVERY TIME it appears, you do it once, same thing with the chakra natures, unnecessarily adding words for nothing
•Please stop with the Japanenglish, either write the technique in Japanese, or English, but not both
•If you start using an expression, keep to it, don’t switch between colour of x and Haki
•Also, we don’t need to see Uzushiogakure no Sato every time we talk about the village, once in a while ok, but not every sentences. Applies for other uses of Japanese in the story (Akuma no mi being the most prominent example)
•Not every female in Uzushio has to be a 10/10 bombshell, no need to add unnecessary adjectives each time they do an action (supple lips, luscious hair, coy expression etc…), ffs most aren’t even in their teens when they are described like that
•In contrast, why are most of the marines just plain dumb in your story, I can understand the mental trauma for Akainu, but not the sheer idiocy
•Did every important marine decide to have a kid at the same time? All of the second gen devil fruit users are close in age, when the parents aren’t
•I doubt the vinsmoke siblings were old enough to participate in the battle (canon age at least), even if at the same time children are fighting on the other side
•For the rewrite, please have a look at the scaling of power and the bounties, to make them more believable especially with what we now know
While I seem very critical, it's because I really like the story and would like to see the concept go as far as possible.
Hope this reaches you in better health, and to read your story soon!