Reviews for Forged in Hellfire: Lost Soul Reborn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I can’t wait! I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the review. I hope to see the next chapter. And while I don't think I ever reviewed this before, tell your cousin that I really appreciate the work that he has done, especially this story, and I deeply appreciate you deciding to continue this story. Other than the pace, I have no issues with this, and I don't see, what all the negatively was about. One thing though. While I look forward to the next chapter, at sometime soon, will the issue between Naruto and the Third Hokage be resolved soon? This version of Hiruzen had made a lot of mistakes with this Naruto and his arrogant and short-sighted effort to bring Naruto back resulted in the death and suffering of good Konoha shinobi, including his own son. And we haven't seen his reaction to the Kurenai's and Anko's version of what happened. So I would like to find out what he feels about all of this, and if the gap between him and Naruto will be mended, remain forever, or rent further asunder. And if he is going to be a problem, be of big help, or just stay on the sidelines and do nothing, like he had done for years. The waiting is killing me. And I wish Hinata all the best. I hope happiness and safety will come to her, Hanabi and Neji, while the elders will get a much deserved beat down, maybe to the point of being crippled and broken to the point of near death, hopefully. I don't know about her father: I'm torn between justice coming to him, to him seeing the error of his ways, maybe both. Either way, it's in your hands and I look forward to the results. Take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest I’ve never gotten into Mortal Kombat so I have no idea what half the stuff going on is but I don’t care this is well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Out of the thousands of fanfiction’s I have read over the years I have maybe read five crossover’s because they are so unwell done. So far I am loving this one you have done very well! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Niiice! This was quite the read! I look forward to what you’ve got coming next chapter! No pressure though. And feel free to PM me for advice if you ever need it! I’ll be happy to help when I have the time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Karin with Fu and Tayuya that works |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm hoping Miren (MIleenaGuren) ends up becoming an ally down the line. that would be most interesting, I think. Guess we'll see, won't we? and oh boy, seems that hinata is going to rain hell down upon some of the Hyuuga clan. Nice. keep up the excellent work! |
![]() ![]() good work. i can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was wondering if Ino will join the pairing because of Hinata/Kitana? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Nice little filler. Looking forward to finding out what caused the timeline shift. And Shikamaru angry? That's a first. Can't wait see it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd have Fu go with Naruto. I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I vote he gets lucky number 7. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story intro! Why did you not classify it as a Mortal Kombat x Naruto crossover then? |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude can you just stop bringing more fucking characters |