the note was attached to a kunai stuck in the window frame not in his jacket you stupid bastard. you make mistakes constantly as if on purpose.

haku bathed for a couple seconds? or naruto is so stupid he can barely read and it took him 15 minutes to do so.

Yuki Haku is her name you dumb faggot. None of your story is any good and died early because you cant be bothered with intelligence or common sense.

Her name is Yuki Haku you ignorant douche.

hey retard her name is Yuki Haku.

hellfire doesnt shoot out when he uses the chain and that would look fucking dumb as fuck anyway it would work better if you said something like the chain was burning with hellfire instead your dumb ass has a ninja being flashy and colorful and telegraphing every single move he makes its ridiculous and stupid like most bullshit on this site to be sure.

momochi haku is not her real name faggot and is retarded as fuck along with all the other choices your ignorant ass keeps making

so much forced plot armor trash

the low IQ and lack of common sense have kept the story from being more than just lame bs.

naruto gets tired really fast so he is just a weakling who is only pretend strong with plot arnor and not even as good as original naruto who had almost endless stamina and chakra but this faggot is too retarded to make this any good at all.

The pathetic fuck still uses orange clothing.

shoot from his wrist? must be bad translation or something as he isnt spiderman

Ah Shit...

your too stupid this aged up faggot bullshit is a waste of time like all the rest good job on your run of mill garbage

Siempre jodiendolo sarutobi, por una de unas cuantas veces que e visto hacer bien las cosas a Kakashi con Naruto y lo quitas de ser su sensei
Pero buen fic, y el final... Hay papus agarre se, se viene pelea/plática de yerno/padre jajaja