hihurzin ur a complete dumbass

I enjoyed the story. It is great idea cross story. Good work on the story.

why is this a useless FANGIRL hinata cunt kicker fic and seriously of ALL the MK babes you go witch Kaiana who bt the way was and still is a reverent like Lu was? I thought it was naruto and haku, who suddenly have become minor players in shier story!

What I never understood about the whole "kids treat naruto bad because their parents told them to" is WHEN HAVE YOU EVER SEEN A KID DO WHAT THEIR PARENTS TELL THEM TO, WHEN ALONE? There isn't a SINGLE kid I have ever even SEEN that does that. In fact, they are more likely to do the EXACT OPPOSITE of what their parents tell them to. (especially if they can prove their parents are "wrong"). And "tweens" and "teens"? ROFL.. Yeah right, sorry but "that doesn't track AT ALL". .. In fact, telling the kids "he's dangerous" or "he's evil" would just send the kids to him IN DROVES! (wanting to be his friend)

"the kyuubi cannot heal a fractured soul" That's probably because, if you follow canon, kyuubi... Or kurama or whatever, is just PART of kagura, so essentially "a fractured soul" and a "whole soul"... It seems kishi stole the concept of this one. Just didn't use the MK franchise and instead somehow turned the "rabbit goddess" into a big FOX... Which makes a little LESS sense then just bringing in the MK universe.

The last fic I read was a masterpiece but the grammar was worse than my 9 month old cousins’ shitty diaper. This is not only a masterpiece as far as plot and storyline go, but it’s also a grammatical masterpiece as well… I hope one day I can place my self into the upper echelon of Naruto fanfic writers to. Asé.

i wonder how peaceful the world would be if nobody said "what's the worst that could happen"

naruto had the whisker marks from birth, not from having the kyuubi sealed into him

i always love it when naruto is given Kubikiribōchō, or Samehada. and i did read a pretty good fanfiction where he found nuibari. always love it when he uses one of those swords

you know what, Sasuke is right... Naruto is dope

hell yeah, naruto starting the fight with my favorite move

Hey man sorry for your loss, take your time and don't worry about the rant I hope you get better soon. I would love to say hope you get back to writing when you feel better, but don't force yourself sometimes doors close and we never feel the need to open them again. best of luck

Well hopefully u find the passion at some point to keep it going was a great story and not that many mortal kombat naruto stories I've found so far other then this one.

what 20 chapter I'm sorry but I have lost massive mother to read this I may read the rest at a later date but no I just cant

"When a soul fractures for any reason, it only has ten minutes to heal that fracture before it becomes unstable until it shatters like glass."

What an arbitrarily short time that is for some reason known, which is then explained in a very indirect way while the clock is ticking. Such odd moment of exposition/dues ex machina.