I know this idea is cool and all, and it’s probably gonna be a really cool story, but frisk was never the one the prophesy spoke of. They weren’t destined to do anything. Asriel was the one in the prophesy. He saw the surface, returned, and freed the monsters. But what makes asriel the one in the prophesy was because HE was the one who broke the barrier. Sure, frisk helped, but asriel was the one who broke it.

"Is something wrong?"

"Taxes"

"Ah, I understand."

I'm deeeeaaaaaddd

awwwww, this is ADORABLE. This is an unusual ship, and I love how you molded it with Sans' genius and Toriel's motherly-ness. Gave me the giggles, LOVIN IIIIIT! :D

BTW, Asgore Dreemurr means 'Reluctant Murderer', not 'Child Murderer'

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ROOOOOOLLLLLLLL CREDITS

How can you tell whether a person wearing a full suit of armour is blushing?

Why didn't Sans just teleport over to where the guards were talking to Frisk?

...Uh...Did Sans also fling the dog into the lava with the other bombs?

How did Sans elbow Undyne's gut if she was wearing her armor at the time?

lmao she said ribbit and randomly made a convo thats so cuteee

This was... was...this was okay.
The way the story developed was not to my liking. I really don't like how this turned out but for the part it took it was OK.
The ruins were hands down the best part of the story, the Toriel interactions and the introduction to a younger Frisk and the dynamics of her wanting to find her parents. The Flowey scenes were just amazing and creepy and I thought that that the rest of the fic may follow the vibe of this scene onward.
O honestly I thought that this fic was going to be more focused on the phenomena that turned Frisk young and what happened in the previous resets to cause this. In reality this turned more into a purely Fluff fic that has some slight story at the side.
Sans was a major disappointment for me in this Fic, the vibe he has in the game is completely gone and he feel non-threatening even when he was trying to be and the backstory was flat and kinda boring. The inclusion of Gaster was quite weak due to the fact he did nothing even tho he was mentioned multiple times within the story.
A big problem in this was the complete absence of Chara from the story even tho she played a vital role with how flowey responded and was inspired.
The differences introduced with the inclusion of Snas and Toriel on frisks journey was quite lame after the point of Snowdin, it felt 'yada yadaed' and not much creative change was applied for my tastes, especially the character interactions with Undyne, Asgore and Alphys was quite dim.
The ending was the worst part, it was quite predictable at that point and just bland.

With all that bad said I must say that the dynamic interaction with Sans, Frisk and Toriel given these circumstance was quite an interesting read and was quite cute to read. The story you gave was good for the path taken but personally I didn't like it.

I finished the story full of LOVE and Determination. Thank you so much for writing, but don't give up here!

I feel like there is something missing...Something that was forgotten. Who knows?

I thank you for allowing readers like me to go with you on this journey, this story...May you have more adventures that are more fun than the last as time shall pass.

As for everyone in this story, may the Reset never occur, and their lives be long and merry.

*rolls eyes* Well, fudge...here we go again. *rolls up sleeves* Let's dance, dandy-little-lion.

Mettaton can be obnoxious, but this version takes the cake and smears it all over Flowey's face before making every snail in the underground combust with his crowing.

I applaud Sans' actions, and would turn Mettaton into a Meow-Chi. On the bright side, the guy might get even more popularity out of that.

For some reason, I think of Toriel as a sort of jackalope instead of a goat. And it is hard to remember that Sans is made of hard bones when he seems like a fluffy marshmallow. The two just to seem to fit together well like pieces of a puzzle. I am sorry for Asgore, but seeing him with Toriel doesn't sit right with me, hence I decided that he and Alphys might be just as nice a couple as Sans and Toriel. Sorry, tangent.

As for Frisk...no surprise at all. It is natural for a child to be mischievous, especially when it comes to parental figures. Reminds me of myself in a fond way. I kind of want the two to just admit their feelings and just marry already, too.

Anyway, thinking of the next chapter...fills me with EXCITEMENT.