|Reviews for What About Twilight?|
| GuesssWho chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
You're so vain, you prob'ly think this song is about you . . .
| Shadow chapter 2 . 12/8/2015
I love this so much. The character dynamic here is absolutely perfect, and as usual you hit the nail on the head with what could be or needed to be retconned in the episode. Very nice!
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Hey, very nice story here. Great job with Twilight and Discord, and you really did your research on how friendship, and relationships in general, usually work.
And of course Rainbow would defend Twilight regardless of power levels. After all, even Celestia has guards.
Keep the good writing.
| Animekitty47 chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Heh, "in particular especially" nice turn of phrase there. XP
I loved the way you wrapped it all up, and as an added bonus no one was at fault this time. :D And look, you completed a story too! :D
Great job with it! I loved the story of what happened that day, and Discord's explanations (Panicking! It looks like fun! Twilight the Joke Killer.) and I hope you and your son are doing well, my dear favorite author.
| Bookworm Gal chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
This was a brilliant way to tie up everything from that episode. I really loved it. Nice work.
| Bookworm Gal chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
Well, this is certainly is an interesting exploration of that episode. Nice work.
| ctran03931 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Discord might have gotten the point to Twilight at some point but I think he's also at fault as well as their friends so nobody's a winner. I still say they're all at fault; because Twilight decided to shut herself out from everyone because of what she thinks to be friendship spell cast over them and they just turned her down when she expressed her opinion on the subject and concerns for them. I still don't think Discord can change despite what we've seen in him; he'll always be a troublemaker through and through.
I have a feeling this conversation could go in the wrong direction if Discord takes it a step too far and Twilight's friends would be in trouble of nearly losing Twilight for a 3rd time not only from Twilight's actions but also for their unintentional call-outs.
They went against their friendship and the lessons they learned three times in a row and while Twilight was at fault for her jealousy and what I believed to be hidden lingering resentment for Discord because of his betrayal in the last season finale, Applejack and the others still haven't learned a thing from what I can see and Discord was taking things way too far to give Twilight the notion to shut them out while also hurting herself in the process.
| ShadowKatt7 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Yay! I'm so glad you decided to write this! I have to admit, I was wondering what your take on that episode was. I think you really touched on all the issues the ep had, and gracefully so! I would honestly probably pay money for a full book on discord's theories of reality, hehehe. I can't wait to see what you write next!
| Animekitty47 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Ah, your input on the episode! That's always marvelous to see.
Ouch, harsh ending. I hope you decide to continue the conversation.
Personally, I'm a fan of IloveKimPossilbeAlot's theory that he did to point out to Twi that she has flaws too.
You sorta did touch on that when you brought up Spike, but since Twi has the show writers unfortunate idea that nothing bad that happens to Spike matters, I mean, Twilight's so used to it, yeah, that's it, she promptly ignored what he was saying instead of considering it.
However, your they're more open/relaxed without Twilight around is a much more interesting idea character-wise. Like I said, I hope you continue this conversation, but then I like every last one of your stories. :D Update something soon please!