(part 2 of my comment because I forget to add this)

I thought for sure Kashina was caught in a genjutsu curtesy of her of her self-riotous dipshit of a husband. how else to her clear cognitive dissidence be explained? the fact she seems to forget was a jinkuriki herself or who she named her daughter after.

If done right, she could have her own redemption arc. leaving Minato and taking the kid's wave working to earn Naruto forgiveness instead of just making half-assed excuses and apologies. refusing to call herself an Uzumaki or mother after all she had done. rebuilding the clan while not being a part of it with tayuya and Karin.

I know it's been years, so this comment probably isn't going to be read but.

why did Kushina think Naruto was a demon? and how come it was so easy for her and the others to get over the delusion once the obvious was pointed out?

also disappointed that the final (fuck you) was not more impactful and deserved. say Karuma and Naruto trap the namizakis in a powerful genjutsu were they witness or even experience what they put him through growing up.

needless to say, Kashina finally divorces Minato, he steps down as hokage and their kids want nothing to do with either of them.

What in ur fucking mind woudk you think oh what make a fanfic of a horribe fucking idea of kurama beings. Fucking girl and Naruto’s dad hating him IF HES THE OEN WHO SEALED KURAMA INSIDE OF THE BOY and why the fuck is it. Naruro x kurama bruh!? That’s a fucking fox YOU MENTALY ILL. Bro never ever COOK again you brunt our mf kitchen yo have -1000000 aura for EVER thinking of this

Сюжет хороший хотя есть и тупые главы, где логики нет я писал в комментарии. А так почитать можно если не обращать на тупость персонажей в отдельных главах.

Убогая глава просто слил наруто в форме лисы , молодец. Ты сделал из него почти боги и слил его тараканам круто.

Глава 16 и 17 ты сделал из наруто бога который орлчимару о пинал как ребёнка и тепь снова посадил наруто в клетку хер пойми каким образом высасал из пальца печати непонятные и все. Очень хорошо я пожал зато с таких тупых глав.

Дочитал до 15 главы и понял сюжет просто мусор, сделать настолько тупым наруто чтл он выполняет все приказы как псина. Автор ты конченный ты знаешь это.

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This store makes no sense why does naruto keep helping just have him kill every one already or stop having him betrayed it doesnt make a good story just a dumbass mc

good

This story made me cry and I think this was a 10 out of 10 story I Read

Why doesn't he destroy konoha . I knew it . Once again he's goes to being konoha bitch

bro ruined whole mood in first para, minato kushina alive and hates naruto

While I have enjoyed this fic for the most part, this chapter has an example of something I've noticed a lot of fic writers do that really puts a crimp on their stories. Namely, it's too married to the plot structure of Naruto as a whole.

Naruto, Kurama, and everyone from Wave walking away from the Gedo Mazo *and* a set of Rinnegan that aren't being used anymore makes *zero* sense. Especially after Kurama said in that same scene that only a Rinnegan can deal with it, the idea of them walking away and (presumably, I'm still reading) handing over the Rinnegan so that the Fourth War can still happen is so mind-boggling to me. Naruto taking Nagato's eyes would be perfectly in-character for him as he is in this fic, but it would also cut the remaining plot in half. I get that making new plot arcs isn't easy, but so many fics cripple themselves or ignore the logic they've established to stick close to canon, and it's a genuine shame every time.

Been awhile since I read this. Had to come rebinge read it