| Reviews for Orange Smile |
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   AceRoyalty chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 Cool story bro! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/29/2017 Poor Hashirama waiting for his best friend to return only to later find out that he was accidentally crushed by a tail of all things. What a sad ending XD! |
| Ailsaficprompts chapter 8 . 8/24/2017 I think its ridiculous that he's trying to keep everything canon. Just by existing everything's different. He should find another way that won't be a beyrayal to his sibs. The way this is going I think he'll try to be threathning but end up having tea with Mito. Him killing Madara by mistake was unexpected yet hilarious. In a world of OP villains, what's one less? *shrug* One less to worry about. Leaving things play out as they would have seems kind of terrible of him. He should just do his best by the people he cares about. That's all anyone can do. When will he learn trying to manipulate things and people will just blow up in his face? He'll end up hated and alone in a ditch. So sad. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/24/2017 I fucking love it! You sir/madam have made me laugh my ads off because you made Kurama/max defeat Madara as if he were a bug. A bug! Oh my gods that made my day. Can't wait to see what's up next! I look forward to it! |
| Isafish chapter 8 . 8/20/2017 1. I hope so? 2. That happened really fast... 3. This is taking an interesting turn! Keep up the great work! |
| Isafish chapter 7 . 8/20/2017 Okay, wow! Unique story here, and rather well written! Hmm...to answer your questions...let's go with SENJUUUUU! YAAAH! Uh, change Naruto? Hm...maybe grant Naruto a decent brain and the ability to let go of people...or, heck, just SI into there. |
| Pina Coladaaaa chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 Awesome! please update! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/18/2017 HAHAHAHAHA I laughed for 10 minutes straight. Freaking amazing |
| Scriptology chapter 8 . 8/17/2017 I didn't think I'd like this as much as I do, but I do! Please update soon! I need more Maxrama in my life! Cheers! |
| Mortred101 chapter 8 . 8/14/2017 Bwahahaha! I LOVE it! Nah, Madara's a whining bastard- a hot whining bastard- nevertheless. Yosh! More please! Ja ne. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/13/2017 yes please work... madara deserves it.. |
| Senju Sowdowwen chapter 8 . 8/12/2017 Madara is dead?! Nooooooooooooooooooo... :-( XD |
| GalanthaDreams chapter 8 . 8/10/2017 I don't know if it will work or not but it is incredibly entertaining. As for Madara's death? Hilarious-because of how anti-climactic the event was and how big the problems this deviation has caused are. |
| ProTaggingProperly chapter 1 . 8/9/2017 Harem, really? Please update your summary. State that it is Harem. |
| Zooming Avid Reader chapter 8 . 8/9/2017 I don't think that Madara is dead. He probably laid Izanagi in his eye as a fail safe in case he was killed. |