Reviews for Orange Smile
phosphophillite49 chapter 8 . 4/20/2022
why
Superjukes chapter 8 . 3/5/2022
I guess we will never know if Max's plans work put...
Landon Holman chapter 8 . 3/3/2022
This is good
MaggYme chapter 8 . 12/27/2021
omg this is awesome!
IsekaIBoi chapter 7 . 12/13/2021
You know the rules and so do I~
Amaniel chapter 8 . 12/9/2021
Oh it's very interesting, thanks for writing it )
TauCetiEarth chapter 8 . 11/21/2021
I want more Kurama SI ;-;
Literally useless chapter 8 . 11/2/2021
bomb the moon, do it
Vanthiyethevan chapter 8 . 11/1/2021
... why the hell would you want to follow the script? kill off zetsu in the first chapter and the whole story becomes better. a lot less death and mayhem as most of the clan wars happened because of zetsu..
b4tling chapter 8 . 10/20/2021
oh well shit, he really killed Madara
CampPillow chapter 8 . 9/29/2021
My reaction to Madara's death? Pure utter shock, like my jaw was to the floor for a solid 3min. What would happen in the future indeed? If Kurama is going to pretend to be Madara, can there be a nice Madara? And if there is I don't want hashirama to find Kurama out.
Spidersauce chapter 8 . 6/10/2021
2. I was glad. The fear of Sharingan makes no sense though. Max/Kurama has the least reason to fear those eyes out of anyone ever. He has literally had centuries to imitate Gai and learn to fight without eye contact, even with eyes closed if he wanted. Without eye contact he can't be mind controlled by Sharingan, and then his being a tailed beast means Madara literally can't so anything even if Kurama just sits there and naps. Sure sealing him is on the table for other people, but that's not a Sharingan thing.
Spidersauce chapter 7 . 6/10/2021
1. Uchiha, assuming they aren't railroaded into the canon plotline. I never bought the whole massacre thing as realistic. Would also depend on when you are in the timeline. I wouldn't be above smothering baby-Itachi, -Danzo, or -Whoever to prevent the massacre.

2. How unbelievably stubbornly stupid Naruto is. Sakura is nice to him once when they're little and he just signs up for a decade of torture and abuse and Sakura being a complete bitch and all-around terrible person to him. Other instances where Naruto does similar things.
AAu.27 chapter 1 . 6/1/2021
1. Doubtful. But with the right push of events, it will.
2. Nopes. It's actually quite comical with how he died. But then Konoha wouldn't come into existence because there's no peace...wait, it should ALREADY be created at this point, right? So yeah, it'll work. Even better so since the clans wouldn't fight between themselves and... oh, wait, the Uchiha Clan would blame the village on foul play and stuff. Oh my gosh. What a future drama.
Slayer76 chapter 2 . 5/10/2021
He's a dumbass, who cares if history flies off course if it means Kaguya stays imprisoned forever and evil Akatsuki never forms
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