Reviews for Orange Smile
Wolfy chapter 8 . 5/1/2021
Give me more please!
JFJ123 chapter 8 . 3/18/2021
This is awesome! An update would be great!
ErzaScarlett122 chapter 8 . 3/4/2021
This guy Madara died, just like that
Brandon Boodoo chapter 8 . 3/1/2021
Lol he slapped madara to death HAHAHAHAHAHAH! almost choke on red bull hahahaa
Zera.Craft07 chapter 8 . 12/23/2020
1. I kinda hope it ends up with him sealed in Mito, then time skip to Kushina.

2. HAHAhahhahhah! Madara has been reduced to a bug to be swatted~ lol.
Bb34 chapter 2 . 11/22/2020
( ꈍᴗꈍ)
fifi chapter 8 . 11/14/2020
I forgot to say that someone should gouged out madara's eyes just in case unless of course he got crushed with the rest of his body
fifi chapter 8 . 11/14/2020
aaaa ! I loved! max / kurama is just a masochist who wants a spanking of a beautiful woman to think about this kind of plan ! he said no? humans don't like what is different and it's not by letting yourself be captured and then convincing your host that you have a feeling he's going to be nice ! it's naive on his part ! they should rather teach their brothers and sisters to take on a human appearance in order to break into the background for example ! take it zetsu, madara it's crushed like a cockroach (eurk)! madara was so arrogant so no hard feelings man if i laughed at your plight, and say it was so easy to get rid of him when he caused the 4th ninja war! I wonder why in cannon it is not crushed ! and i hope this idiot kurama will not immediately say his identity (or never) god is that the friendship he is looking for is not going to happen overnight, and he should maybe learn fuinjutsu to keep his human appearance well ! well i just hope you didn't give up because it's so awesome ! good luck !
Guest chapter 8 . 11/9/2020
XD Die Madara Die
Guest chapter 8 . 10/13/2020
i want more! :(
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2020
omake instant harem
Shion Lee chapter 8 . 8/22/2020
I keep imagining Plankton being crushed underfoot by Spongebob lmaooooo I’m sorry i laughed

Please continue!
Xh3ll10nX chapter 8 . 8/21/2020
1. I guess i want Kurama’s plan to work.
2. Lol
diamondgod77777777 chapter 2 . 7/22/2020
One question? Does he really hate everybody that much? What's so great about the Plot?! There are a million and one sad stories and about 60% of them are the doing of Black Zetsu! It was even explained that the warring clans period was Black Zetsu's fault. I would just eat him and he done with it. Sure Naruto would never rise up as the "Child of Prophecy" but then he wouldn't be needed!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/22/2020
please continue
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