really love this story can't wait for new chapters

Thank you for the great chapter, and keep up the awesome work

Is this continuing? This is so good.

Please continue , I absolutely loved this last chapter

great so far hope you continue

Isnt that what double team is? Its afterimage of moving so fast or is visual clones

Great story

I’m really hoping that Buneary Dawn caught was actually the one that fell in love with Pikachu and not the one she saw at the start of her journey. I’m a huge fan of PikaBun.

I’m also hoping she stops being a damsel in distress and actually learns how to fight back.

Since Brock isn’t here, what does that mean for Uxie?

This was nice, Ash bringing his old Pokémon to Sinnoh, Pikachu actually showing his strength after the battle pyramid, Ash’s all accomplishments and becoming a Pokémon ranger being known, Ash easily beating Paul in their first battle and getting Chimchar in the process, and Dawn gaining Ash’s Aipom from the start is definitely good in my opinion.

The only problem I have is the fact that Dawn and Piplup needed to be saved by Ash and Pikachu, while in the anime, they managed to save themselves.

Still going to my favorite.

This was truly epic and amazing. Hope the muse for this story sings again someday.

isnt nyah the sound of a cat?

he also let hunter j escape? i wonder if he will help Drapion find their original trainer they were stolen from?

as a pokemon ranger, he shouldnt threaten to turn any pokemon into a handbag, that is so wrong on like every single level

ash is a bit of an asshat. sad dawn lost, but it was a close onethey finally kisses too! also, honestly, girls with small boobs can easily be far cuter than girls with large ones.

ash commenting on someone having an attitude problem is rather ironic considering his own