|Reviews for Out in the Rain|
| My Dear Professor McGonagall chapter 9 . 1/20/2016
My heart! I love them so. Wonderful, wonderful!
| MandyinKC chapter 9 . 1/19/2016
Oh, I logged on and had to do a double take when this caught my eye. Yay! for more fluff. I liked that you showed that George made an effort to make up for past bad behaviors and that it was important to Angelina that he did so. And that George is making a point of charming Angelina after taking her for granted for so long. My favorite line: "Having not yet learned not to accept food from the-from George, her teammates accepted, and Angelina had laughed herself to tears at the sight of her brusque, burly captain as a bright yellow canary." We'll just pretend we didn't notice the slip up and enjoy this image!
| MuggleCreator chapter 8 . 1/16/2016
| MuggleCreator chapter 7 . 1/16/2016
| MuggleCreator chapter 5 . 1/16/2016
Ouch! Oh, dear...
| MuggleCreator chapter 4 . 1/16/2016
| MandyinKC chapter 8 . 1/13/2016
Oh no, I thought we were done with angst! My favorite line is "...soul-deep hunger for something-someone-that could never be satisfied." I think that perfectly sums up George's state of mind in the early days (months, years) of grieving. There is a subtle shift in the second paragraph where Angelina is deflecting her own grief by making it smaller than George's. Very good. No more angst, please?
| My Dear Professor McGonagall chapter 7 . 1/6/2016
Oh my god. I'm squealing. Love those Weasley babies :D
| AdriDee chapter 7 . 1/5/2016
This was soooooo cuuuuuuute! Ugh. The things you do for your nieces/nephews... Great job, as usual!
| MandyinKC chapter 7 . 1/5/2016
Oh, George is overtaken by little girls! this one is so cute. I love the image in my head of Princess George. But I think that Little Molly steals the show. I have such a vivid imagine in my head of a glitter covered, ginger fairy princess cherub. But who thought it would be a good idea to leave /George/in charge?
My favorite line: "...and would Angelina please come over /right the hell now/ as he was alone with Victoire, Dominique, Louis, and Molly."
| NiDZY chapter 7 . 1/5/2016
very cute! sorry i haven't reviewed before, but i'm avidly following this fic just as i had with your previous one :) Also I just read the update regarding your upcoming stories and I am unbelievably excited for the Ron/Hermione version of Faintest, Slimmest, Wildest Chance! I also remember you were planning on making a sequel to that, so I was wondering if there is any news on that or is it too early to tell us anything? Thanks for being a great writer and I love re-reading your stories!
| AdriDee chapter 6 . 12/30/2015
| MandyinKC chapter 6 . 12/30/2015
This one. Is. My. Favorite. What's my favorite part? All of it. How to even pick? But if I must...First, the tone. It's obvious from the voice that George is in a much better place than he was even in the last chapter. Second, the believablty of flying a broomstick. The little details you add like the wind being louder as they cleared the goal posts. Third, every single moment of interaction between George and Angelina. His humor ("...good thing I planned on playing you.") Her being a good sport about his terrible jokes. George knowing that Angelina's slap on the wrist was half hearted because she could hit harder than that (and that he's obviously experienced that first hand). And last, but most importantly, the description of George's seduction and Angelina's rising arousal. Well done.
| My Dear Professor McGonagall chapter 6 . 12/30/2015
Hahahahah XD I LOVE IT!
| My Dear Professor McGonagall chapter 5 . 12/23/2015
SO CLOSE! How can you?! It's CHRISTMAS! ;)