Reviews for I'm Not Good at Breathing In
LandonCalrisian chapter 1 . 9/15
Even if it's a little outta date, I still think this is the best Bojack fanfic out there. For whatever that's worth. Bless you few authors who write in this microscopic fandom.
charliecartoons chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
This was really well written and hit me hard
Bianca Cai chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
I thought everything was so in-character! Plus your writing is fantastic! I have a question though. When BoJack said he wouldn't do anything with Penny, because she deserves better, was this him lying to Todd to make himself seem like a better person? I mean, he did make out with Penny, and probably would've had sex with her if Charlotte hadn't walked in. Or was BoJack being self-congratulating for not making a move on Penny when she showed up on his doorstep?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
awesome brev
Lycans Are Gods Gift To Furrys chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Congratulations on creating the first Bojack Horseman fanfic (or just the first one posted in it's own category now) hopefully many others will follow. Bojack is a great show
Sorvali chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Nice writing. I really like your style and vocabulary. I am really looking forward for a Bojack/Penny re-encounter on S3 but I don't think it will happen, so this was a pretty good way to fullfill that desire for me. Of course, I noticed that the comedy level doesn't try to antagonize the show in any sense, but that's a great add to the story, a more cut-to-chase approach of things.

Keep up the good work and greetings form Mexico.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
Good up the good work.