Hmmm I was contemplating if I feel like reading this right now or later… ima have to come back to this and your other stories. Feel like reading Konosuba fanfiction right now. Nevertheless, the subtle changes I’ve seen so far makes this an interesting take on the storyline. I’m curious on how much gonna change just cuz of these few differences

I’m so happy that this story ended with all the characters that I know and love getting the happy ending of living together that they rightfully deserve. This is by far my biggest, most beloved, personal favorite fanfiction story I’ve ever read. It’s gotten me through pretty much all of my college semesters through graduation and to where I am now.

However, there are major two inconsistencies with the final chapter that I must address. It would’ve been nice if we got a detailed description of what happened to Bold and his family in the aftermath of the final battle once the emperor and the Prime Minister were defeated. And lastly, you never gave us the closure that Mary gave Tatsumi and his lovers the absolutely delicious meal like she had promised him that she would do once the war was over. If it’s not too much to ask, JTZ29, could you please consider redoing chapter 44 so that both of these two loose ends are tied up in your story? So that both Mary and Bols are included in it leaving no issues or regrets behind? Please and thank you.

you know what... I really thought that it'd be bolo first or whatever

Kinda need some more diversity in the lemons.
Some Kinks here and there, Some different speaking other then just Harder Faster, You know some Bio-Diversity.
And multiple for one girl, Instead of just one for one girl and then never again.

man you really don't wait on the Lemons.
If you wrote a DXD fanfic there'd be a Lemon in like the third or second chapter

Been a while since I've read a 300k word story in a day. Hate to see it end as good as it was. It was a fantastic read, much the same with your other stories.

I'm curious, what happened with Wave and Kurome? Were they able to cure her and extend her life expectency at all? Did she and Akame finally get to spend time together and be sisters again after it was all said and done?

Honestly, my only complaint is your 'post story' is so damn short. Lot of plot threads you left unresolved that are begging to be tied up...(heh.)

Speaking of, was amused by what you did with Suzuka. I wonder if 'Master' will ever bless her with a child herself? Though I definitely fear for the child's sanity with her as a mother LOL.

A shame Incursio 'died' so to speak, but I am sure Tatsumi will club him over the head enough with the bat called friendship that he'll come back around.

All in all, very enjoyable my gripe about the wrapup being too short aside.

Final fericit

Thank you so much for an amazing story. I'll be reading more of your current work and any future works that interest me. Also I could say that I would've liked to see some action going on between the girls, but that's just me. But you did an amazing job, keep up the good work.

sheele shouldn't have died, you could have fixed the writers shitty writing by making so she cut off seryu's head instead of her arms, or to make to where her scissors actually cut through anything like her gun tonfa's

finally got around to finishing this. awesome story mate.

Great story totally worth the wait just one question will there be a sequel.

Hype

So surreal seeing this finished. I remember reading the first chapter release day after finding your Pokémon story I think it was so long ago I can't remember. I only remember being in high school this story and others like it got me through high-school. I am happy that it was completed but also sad to not see this stroy updated after every couple of months.

Lastima que haya terminado, pero al mismo tiempo me alegro mucho, eres de los pocos que pudieron terminar el trabajo, enorgullecete por lo que hiciste, recibe con orgullo los aplausos y elogios; gracias por esta historia, nunca lo olvidaré.

A good ending to this story. I’ve been following it for quite some time, and it’s quite satisfying to see how it comes to a conclusion. Also, interested in the Mato Seihei no Slave story you mentioned. I’ll be looking forward to when you begin making that.