Reviews for Scions of Kobol |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good while it lasted |
![]() ![]() ![]() Admiral Drescher was a woman in ME |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love these crossovers but a few things always ruins it for me. Human just roll over...and mostly its for authors a way to get the asari in bed literally with the humans. 1. Humans if they have a big advantage immediately give it away and beg for seats instead of locking that relay down and building up their own society. 2. Treat the fic like ST where all the aliens kinda get along...these aint ST aliens. Interesting...very interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to adopt this had I not have so much already on my plate... None the less a good read. It didn't stick in eras too long and slow the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great and good fun. What I can't wait to see is how some earth humans react when they realize they've just accepted a bunch of alien citizens in the Colonial Asari who would be covered by their letting in their brothers. I do like this take and setup. I'm going to enjoy this story I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very fun chapter. Though I think things are just barely starting to get bad as I hardly expect that the systems alliance is going to be happy or willing to let things go so easily. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, I'm almost amused that no one spoke up about building a battlestar without an Ezo core first, and worry about building that in later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so will they answer the question and will they care what happened . |
![]() ![]() ![]() why would there 13th tribe help them always wondered . should be fun see what happens next . |
![]() ![]() ![]() surprised they did not argue more about what they wanted . fun to see what happens next . |
![]() ![]() ![]() fun start , interesting to see what will change . |
![]() ![]() ![]() You. Need. A. Be-ta! Seriously, if I am stopping every four sentences to figure out what you mean to say, something is wrong. English is not your native language, is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm disappointed that you're stopping writing this story, because this is a very good chapter. Plot wise. You do need to work on your dialog, it sounds forced. Have you considered writing it like a historical text book? Your ideas are really good, I want to read more! Please reconsider continuing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool that sound better then the original series for both |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad you can't continue this and thanks for these snippets. They were enjoyable. Hope things start working out for you. |