Reviews for Rewriting History
Jackenjill chapter 8 . 6/6
I loved it. Very well written despite the fact that it covers three generations of characters in 8 chapters. Also, what a clever story!
magicanimegurl chapter 8 . 5/9
Go Yama/Naruto! I like the changes that saved Uzu and destroyed Konoha. I especially like Itachi and Nauto as brothers. Write on!
priyanshi sharma chapter 7 . 4/14
Anko is NOT worthy of Naruto.
And while the story is amazing and all it does have some major flaws in it which if fixed will make the story far more better.
priyanshi sharma chapter 8 . 4/14
The story was so amazing I can't explain it in words with proper grammar and an equally fantastic and amazing plot.
BUT the only thing I did not like about the story is the fact of Naruto even considering the idea of being with any women other Hinata since clearly Hinata has earned the right to have Naruto's complete devotion, love and faithfulness only towards her with all the sacrifice she made in the other timeline. And I personally believe a man does not need more than one women in his life and vice versa, their devotion and love should be towards only one special person in their live.
Not to mention, you neglected mentioning Hinata's thoughts or point of view about Naruto while you did mention Anko's who I personally see worthy of Naruto and just as a crazy and always angry women when compared to sweet and loving hinata.
Also you didn't mention about other members of konoha 12 and their join senseis and the other jinchurikis about being saved cause as I see it Naruto surely wouldn't have left them them to suffer at the hands of their village and be used as weapons of war, now would he?
So while the sis amazing it does have some major flaws in it.
Hmason chapter 8 . 4/7
wonderful story
ShinigamiNoKitsune209 chapter 8 . 4/6
Oh-lala! Very well written this is! Props to you my friend!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/14
t R fe
Mari Wollsch chapter 8 . 3/14
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
troutman30 chapter 8 . 1/7
Between you and the Great Snafu the last two nights of Naruto trashing Konoha have been a couple of fun nights of reading! I just have to go thru my list of favorites to continue the fun tomorrow night! Any recomendations
mckertis chapter 8 . 12/8/2017
Overall, a decent quality work, grammar included (which is unexpected, from a USian), even if the last two chapters lower the bar rather significantly.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
I'd read your story's past the first chapter more often but you insist upon using the betrayed naruto so often.
Kibo Oto chapter 8 . 11/11/2017
This should've been the story line for the original Naruto universe. This is absolutely magnificent in writing terms.
tanithlipsky chapter 8 . 11/6/2017
cool
era-romance chapter 8 . 10/28/2017
funny! love the use of bleach and one piece names. good job
r10roce chapter 8 . 9/25/2017
A very good story, the truth is that I love it. I hope you find stories as good as this.
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