Reviews for Twintale
Sai Og Sus chapter 14 . 3/20/2017
Another exposition! I like how you are taking a realistic view upon the characters. Major and Minor all share a depth.
So, Grillby remember. That's a nice headcanon.
Sai Og Sus chapter 13 . 3/20/2017
I was hoping for a full date between Mabel and Papyrus. Kind of disappointed at the beginning but when you showed us Sans Lab, that changed it.
So Frisk did came here. He was supposed to do it again but someway, somehow, the twins were there to stop him. So why didn't he follow?
smargianne chapter 9 . 3/11/2017
God i laughed so hard at sans 'nuuuu...'
Junior VB chapter 14 . 3/6/2017
Gran capitulo.
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Great chapter.
Junior VB chapter 13 . 3/2/2017
Sans está enojado con los gemelos. No lo culpo.
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Sans is angry with the twins. I don't blame him.
Junior VB chapter 12 . 3/2/2017
Papyrus es un monstruo fuerte.
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Papyrus is a strong monster.
Hazulnutpower chapter 9 . 2/27/2017
"...nuuuu..." Jeez, I can totally see me saying this to one of my friends. X3
Junior VB chapter 11 . 2/20/2017
Dipper quiere aprender cómo luchar.
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Dipper wants to learn how to fight.
HackerGod-707 chapter 7 . 2/17/2017
The underground is full of puzzles... and puns. Puns everywhere-
Junior VB chapter 10 . 2/14/2017
Buen trabajo con la interacción entre Mabel y Flowey.
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Good job with the interaction between Mabel and Flowey.
Junior VB chapter 8 . 2/14/2017
Me gustan los acertijos.
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I like puzzles.
titan616 chapter 26 . 2/14/2017
I really like this story, it's well-written and you went into a lot of detail compared to the few other Undertale crossovers I've read where some character falls into the Underground. I liked seeing the mystery twins adventuring together again, they're such an awesome pair. And Sans is a total badass, taking on Bill Cipher like that. Thanks for writing such a great crossover.
Junior VB chapter 7 . 2/12/2017
Es dulce cómo Dipper y Mabel se cuidan entre si.
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It's sweet how Dipper and Mabel take care of each other.
Junior VB chapter 6 . 2/12/2017
Buen capitulo.
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Good chapter.
Junior VB chapter 5 . 2/12/2017
Sans es gracioso.
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Sans is funny.
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