That was a great first chapter and story idea.

Naruto should have a harem

Very interesting pls keep it up

hey good luck whit your new story,already liked it,never seen esdeath join konoha before keep up good work.

like narutoxharem

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This was good. I like the ending with the massage lol.

So if they head to the empire whose gonna be alive and dead?

nice

Hmmm... are you going to the anime route or the manga route of Akame game Kill? also with arc are you using when you imprisoned Esdeath(Esdese Original naming)? also who are those left alive after her imprisonment? and what of Naruto x Hinata pair? cause I do know that if you are going to the Gaiden arc of Naruto then Hinata is needed cause The Last is close to the Gaiden Arc also awesome new fic though I hope you update it soon...

At first I thought thus wasn't going to work out or the way you would connect the two worlds but I have to admit you did really good and I can't wait for the second chapter.

Very good story, I hope to see forward to the next chapter.

hope to see more.

seems hard to believe someone like esdeath could ever influence naruto in any significant way, guy makes a habit of turning bad people good.

I hope the pairing is with Esdeath and I doubt she would share Naruto with anyone

Awesome intro
Looking forward to more
Hope for Naruto/Esdeth pairing

I have been waiting to see a good crossover between these two with naruto and esdeath in it, and i approve of this so far! Good work!