Reviews for The Clarity of Everything |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I need more of this, great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was nice to see the different perspectives. Based on Taiza's opinion of Azula, she seems prone to jealousy. I wonder how she'll take the knowledge that he was traveling with a girl (Katara) for months on end (discounting Aang and Sokka)? I can't imagine she'll be too happy about that. Great fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stopping here is cruel |
![]() ![]() Yo you cant just stop this deep intothe story bruv, where's the rest? |
![]() ![]() ![]() if zuko had katara necklace to track her via shirshu, and the tracker refused to take the job, and they haven't seen hide nor hair of zuko at all, how does katara have it again? your AU internal consistency is more important than following the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excuse me? how dare you. you write something so intriguing, so interesting, so different, and you DON'T resolve a lot of the inter-character conflict? how am I ever gonna sleep again without knowing how MC reconciles with the gaang? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really fun story! Sad to see it fall to the wayside. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this story. Up to this point, it felt like a standard Avatar story with an original character added on. However, the reveal of Taiza and the plot of this chapter has gotten me really enticed. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapter written. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tu historia ha sido una de las mejores que he leído desde el universo del Avatar, por favor sigue actualizando! Quiero ver el reencuentro y el primer encuentro con Toph. |
![]() ![]() Sooo many changes. Garbage. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Después de tanto tiempo, volveras a actualizar? Los giros en la trama con Sai/Taiza se estan poniendo cada vez más interesantes. |
![]() ![]() Been more than two years since the last update :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to reading more of this. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn it still hurts everytime I read this fuck. |