Reviews for Unbroken
softball.bandplayer chapter 4 . 12/8
just read the notes for this chapter and you should not have been excited that season killed my soul
vampwalker709 chapter 25 . 7/22
Ok how does this douche think she is untrained if he was watching her and lexa

either he was lying or that is some kind of typo.
SuperGeek616 chapter 46 . 7/19
It was a great story. At first i wanted to read it but was apprehensive because of the word count but I got over my fear and read it. The story was amazing. Thank you for writing it.
Nightingale116 chapter 1 . 6/15
Love it!
david chapter 46 . 6/8
greatist 100 fanfic there is im calling it, you arean amazing writer thank for such refreshing take on the story we love.
david12leca chapter 16 . 5/10
Brilliant oh so well done im so impressed with the visual descriptions painted an amazing story in my head
Kynance93 chapter 31 . 5/6
Well. Im not gonna lie i didnt see that coming. Im usually good with noticing things but that i didnt see coming. Nice plot twist :)
Madjai6 chapter 1 . 4/27
I know I'm very much behind. But I literally feel like I could throw up every single time Clarke allows them to talk down about lexa without asking them one simple question. "If it came down to being able to save every one of our people while also abandoning the grounders what would you choose?" End of fucking issue.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 36 . 4/20
Who is Reese in the Show? And did Clarke give anything away to Nia why under the influence of the Joni Nuts? Did Nadia know they were in there?! And why would Walsh betray Lexa?! Fuck him! Excuse my language! But still! Did he think Clarke was Lexa's weakness?! Seriously why is he acting like another Gustus?! Was he bribed?! Wasn't he a very old friend to Lexa?! Was he one of Lexa's generals? Does Lexa have only Trikru warriors with her right now or other warriors from other clans? And Nia doesn't know that the Skaikru has guns! So they can use that to their advantage ! -Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 35 . 4/20
Is Emerson still alive? - Munro McLarenI hope you answer back! :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 32 . 4/20
What do you mean who betrayed Lexa?! Maloch said he had been watching Lexa and Clarke! So nobody but the Ice Nation betrayed Lexa! And what was the picture Lexa was looking at in the wall?! What happened to it? What exactly did Maloch do to the cave?! Why did he set the fur on fire? Why did he destroy the cave? And aren't they in Trikru territory? So why were Ice Nation warriors there?! And why did Lexa suspect Taigon?! I mean there's a dead Ice Nation warrior out front! How many warriors does Lexa has? How many does Skaikru have? Who went back to Arkadia? Where's Pike? Sorry for the questions! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 30 . 4/20
Why doesn't the girl have a name? What did she do to be put in prison? Why hasn't Nia killed her yet? Is Roan in this story? Had Maloch discovered that Clarke had been using chalk to mark the trees? What did it mean "Clarke realized what had happened" this was said right after the chalk fell from her hands. And why did Clarke chance her mind about the deal? I thought she was going to betray Lexa? - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 16 . 4/20
How deep was the cut in Clarke's thigh? Was it even that serious? And do the children have swords or knives? Because Clarke said earlier she didn't want them to train with their knives but I thought Lexa gave them swords? And is each hilt of the sword decorated differently for each child? Around how big is each sword that each child has? - Munro McLaren
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How are the Skaikru that good at shooting an arrow already?! And even managing to kill a boar! How long did it take Clarke to kill an animal with a bow and arrow?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 15 . 4/20
Why did you have to kill Hope?! Why?! I really wanted her to survive! Why couldn't Clarke save her?! If hope had been at Camp Jaha or Abby had been there, would Hope have been saved?! And is Farm Station at Camp Jaha yet? In the Show, did Telsa Station crash? Did nobody survive? Callie is Abby's best friend?! I didn't know that! Isn't she Kane's wife? I was hoping that this was Farm Station in the beginning and Pike wouldn't become so xenophobic because the Grounders would t have attacked them! And how did 40 people die?! Like of what?! And how far did they travel to find shelter? Did they land in the Dead Zone? Isn't the Dead Zone by water? They didn't see Jaha? Or Murphy? When Clarke arrived with Lexa and her warriors it sound like Nelya had seen Grounders before and didn't trust them. Thank god she is now! And there are only 4 Skaikru kids?! How did most people die in the crash?! Were they not buckled? Why didn't the delinquents go in one of the Stations? Why a dropship? And what people on the Ark didn't make it onto a Station? How were they picked? Like wasn't Kane's mother in Farm Station? But why was Kane and Callie separated and also separated from Kane's mother? That doesn't make sense. Did any children from Farm Station survive? Sorry for the questions! I love this! And Lexa and Clarke can definitely sway their people in accepting their love of each other! Hopefully this newly formed peace and friendship between Lexa and her warriors and the Tesla Station Skaikru will help prove to the rest of the Sakura Camp Jaha that Lexa wants to help and not to listen to all of Pike's bullshit! Excuse my language! How old was Lexa and Taigon when her parents died? And Lexa didn't live in Polis. She lived in Ton DC I'm pretty sure or at least a Trikru village. Is Indra the clan leader or the leader of Ton DC? And why wasn't she picked to be leader before Anya? And how was she picked to be Lexa's general? Was Anya basically Lexa's general because she was Lexa's mentor? And I'm pretty sure in the Show the Grounders make it a point to teach the warriors and healers and people Gonasleng. Because that's the Warrior's Language. And I love how Lexa is teaching the kids how to use swords! And how Toma sits in Clarke's lap when she reads to them! I love how the Skaikru are implementing what the Grounders are doing and applying it to themselves! This group of Skaikru is WAY MORE ACCEPTING of Grounder ways! I love it! Hopefully they'll knock some sense into the rest of the Skaikru! Who can say "no" to a bunch of kids? Lol! And I hope Hope's mother starts to heal! I thought the little girls name was Grace but I was wrong. Lol! Why did you have to kill her?! I hate you for that, but only that. :) And who was Miss Lucy? Reese said her name. And did Resse know of her father's decision before he did it? Did he even say goodbye? What happened to Reese's mother? Is Nelya like Reese's guardian? Why did Reese's father have to die?! He could've just left it for someone else to do! How long after the killing of the 300 warriors did they send everyone to Earth? How did Jaha come down? Okay I'll stop with the questions! Lol! - Munro McLaren
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Do you ship Emison or Supercorp?
I posted a collection of Clexa and Clexa Family One Shot Prompts on AO3 and you can use any of them you want! I hope you go check them out! Along with my PLL and Emison story, I know it's not Clexa but I find that some or many Clexa shippers ship Emison. Must be something about those blonde and brunette ships! Haha! :)

Chapter 15 REVIEW!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 46 . 4/20
So Reese and Thom are staying with Clarke?! Yassss! And Jasper finally is trying to forgive Clarke or well he's at least being civil towards her! And did everybody see Lexa and Clarke kiss? Won't people think that is weakness? Also when Lexa is holding Thom and hugging them isn't that considered weakness? I mean the Grounders aren't ones for affection. And what did Taigon's war paint look like again? I love this! Now onto the SEQUEL! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Do you ship Emison or Supercorp?

I posted a collection of Clexa and Clexa Family One Shot Prompts on AO3 and you can use any of them you want! I hope you go check them out! Along with my PLL and Emison story, I know it's not Clexa but I find that some or many Clexa shippers ship Emison. Must be something about those blonde and brunette ships! Haha! :)
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