Another great story! You never fail to impress me!

Great story. I wonder why Harry tried to cling to Ron. He was a lousy friend. I wish Dumbles had paid more for his actions, but just as in real life, many times the real criminals get away.

The content of the story was excellent, but for some reason the dialogue feels robotic and unemotional. Oh well, I still had a good time and the epilogue felt very satisfying. Thank you for the story.

Cleverly done, thank you.

This was a FANTASTIC story! It is very well thought out and written to a very satisfying conclusion.

I like your approach on how Voldemort, Dumbledore, and Ron were dealt with. I like the friendships that happened too.

Honestly waiting for Harry to cut ties with Ron

Thank you for this story. I enjoyed it very much.

This was great.

Good to Sirius.

Dumbles betrayed the Marauders and future Death Eaters when they were kids.

Hope he faces some punishment in your story.

Reason able, believable, and effective.

Sirius better have a damn good story.

Why I will never reread Canon. Once I figured out MOB they became an anthema

Nice to see her loyalty. But it will drive more BS from Ron

I loved this approach to the prophecy and horcrux!

I don't know how I feel about this story. On the one hand it's more realistic. On the other though it's like you took out all the cool magic and replaced it with a bunch of drab lawyers and contracts.

Readable is my verdict.