Good story in principle but I recall an AN where you wanted them to resemble people, but humans aren't so closed off to anger like violet is. She is still at an age where it should affect many more actions then written. Also, it's a bit of unashamed lack of creativity just having it follow canon. All the major events are the same. Which is wrong for this concept to flourish. Other than that it is good enough that I can feel such things for said characters even if it were different.

I think im done with this story. I read it a while ago and am only now catching up, but I suppose my tastes have changed since then. its not too bad or anything, but Violet isnt a character that I enjoy much, and everyone (even adults) are very one dimensional and the story is mostly told insteed of lived. However, it does contain some original pieces that were enjoyable, and I think the way you are handeling the Slythering and Voldemort (while a bit unrealistic) is nice. I agree that Violet doesnt have to be a typical Slythering to belong to the house. I also think you will propably start deviating more from cannon soon. I recomend this fic to anyone who doesnt enjoy complicated stories, donț like overpowered characters and doesnt mind some Albus, Ron, sister of the GWL bashing. Good luck author!

Its really annoying when you read a story so long ago you barely remember what happened. Clearly i need a refresher

Magicals always fear death when they finally come across something that can't be fixed immediately with magic. They get so arrogant that a handicap becomes almost inconsequential. Moody altered himself a lot and he is good. Violet can't and is surprised by it. It's hubris and arrogance that magicals are guilty of, purebloods especially.

The students becoming her bodyguards is adorable to me. I think it's sweet. Flint gets all the brownie points. I hope marvolo appreciates the guy. If anyone in that house needs the supervision it's violet.

Remus finally telling her the news was good. She is dead right about rose though. And we all know who is the most likely to blame for it.

Can't wait for more from you. I hope all diseases stay the hell away from you. You have been through a lot.

Excellent work! Enjoyed this a lot and am so glad you’re back! I hope that as your health and other things in life get better, your work will come out even quicker in quantity and quality! No pressure intended of course. Let your health and stuff recover first.

In any case, really enjoying how all this continues and looking forward to more! Until then.

Your really need to update more often, but still, a great chapter as always.

Nice work as always! Your updating schedule is atrocious but you somehow keep working on the story for years; no idea how you manage to do that. Kudos and much love to you 3

and I am officially caught up this has been an amazing ride I was sorry to hear about your eyes and your brother i have lost a few family's in the past couple years too well they weren't as close as a brother i will still miss them dearly and do every day as I am sure you do as well and I look forward to whatever you have planned for this story you have not disappointed in any way thus far

hey ignore all the ignorant mases this story is great maybe I don't agree with everything and that's okay do I think Dumbledore is a little ooc sure but this is a fanfiction if I was expecting Dumbledore to be exactly like Dumbledore I would he reading jk rowlimg but I'm reading this because it is interesting and good and the twists and turns the will she won't she and the potential for a decent reputore with voldemort all in all I am very satisfied with the way this story is progressing

Dumbledore you fool an orphanage other than that wonderful start and I can see him making this decision and the fact he could have left her with alice or Remus yes alice and her husband were made insane by death eaters but that wasn't for about 6 months to a year after the attack and Remus oh the absolute fuss those two must of kicked up in Dumbledores office would've been a sight to see

Dogshit.

Usual "uwu dark pawtar" trash. Not evil not grey not selfish "dark" protag of course.

Amazing story! Breathtaking plot and the character development is outstanding! I hope to read more soon :) :) :)

There’s no apparent reason for this orphanage business. Especially with how it went for tom

Oh...? Like he really wasn't the one behind her and Rose's name coming out? I thought he was, and that the task was rigged that way by someone else to make Violet look bad (though to anyone with a brain it would be obvious the worse-looking one is Rose, not answering a riddle even, while her twin successfully got past both dragon AND nundu). Or he wasn't responsible for Violet's name but was for Rose's? But if Violet's the GWL they why would he need Rose? Or he was lying...? Aaargh! I thought I understood what was going on and turns up, hey I don't! I kind of need the next chapters because obviously, my brain's a bit deficient :)

Gracias por volver a escribir, he esperado mucho por esta historia