|Reviews for Obsession|
| Lurker of the Storm chapter 11 . 4/20
I have read a lot of fanfic in my long time here and I generally lurk like a boss. I came of my cave because I gotta say, this is hands down some of the best stuff I have read. Thank you.
| LilPotterfanfic chapter 11 . 3/30
This story warmed my heart like no other. Thank you so much for writing it!
| strayphoenix chapter 11 . 3/7
What an amazingly cute and heartwrenching reveal story!
| strayphoenix chapter 9 . 3/7
Great action scene!
| strayphoenix chapter 7 . 3/7
Update: still screaming incoherently
| strayphoenix chapter 4 . 3/7
This entire chapter was just incoherent screaming on my end. The CUTE. The SILLINESS. THE FEELS. Keep up the good work!
| seireidoragon chapter 11 . 2/7
This was an adorable story by the end and I would love to read the sequel. Well done!
| Ellie chapter 11 . 1/13
Wow...I am in love with this!
| AlexNGwenFriends chapter 11 . 1/5
This was amazing to read! I read from three in the morning to eight o’clock, and I don’t regret it at all. Looking forward to reading the sequel!
| Elenthya chapter 11 . 12/18/2017
Such a great conclusion.
And so, this is mine...
I enjoyed the way you made them act, feel and think as embodiments of their totem (the Cat and the Ladybug). Very inspiring.
I love Adrien more and more now you gave him this kind of thoughts, so cannon in my opinion. The same for Marinette.
And the incing on the cake in this chapter? This sentence here: "There is a sequel called "Glaze"."
Thank you so much for this beautiful and inspiring story.
See you soon, très chère auteur.
| Elenthya chapter 10 . 12/18/2017
"Well. Marinette told you."
"Are you a boy?"
Facepalm. Double, triple facepalm. Yeah, it IS possible.
And the last reveal. Wow. Now this gives so much sense to the Ladybug and Marinette acts. So much.
That was beautiful. Cute, amusing, adorable. Bittersweet at the beginning, as always. And lightly sensual in the end. Oh my gosh, I want some more. Can I? May I ?
Gotta go. Gonna savour the last chapter.
See you soon, dear autor.
| Elenthya chapter 9 . 12/18/2017
"...by Ladybug knocking on his window."
...Aaaaaaand an other truck hit à.
My neighborood now knows THE cry of a miraculous fanfigirling. Are you proud of yourself?
Can we just speak about the "Cat" diversion? No? No? No! I'm too emotionnal and my poor English just flew away with my common sense and my dictionnary, scared by my fangirl screaming.
Can we just speak about this refreshing dynamic between Tikki and Chat Noir I loved the way they interact and I loved the way Plagg and Tikki seems to interact secretly with each other since the beginning not using words or meetings but just as if they were the two sides of a same coin but they're syrely is and... ahuuuuuu, breath in breath out. Here we go again!
Can we just speak of the cuddle moment with all this fluff and all this promesses like "I'll come see you tonight" and blablabla and gojugjfjsfjsdfmjqsmjmj (come back my english!)
AND WTF THE ENDING I AM JUST SO GLAD TO BE ABLE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!
And thanks. Merci à toi.
| Elenthya chapter 7 . 12/18/2017
Marinette: "I don't know what to say."
Yeah. Me neither.
| Elenthya chapter 6 . 12/18/2017
("Do the "other" things with your mouths"... Oh, Plagg.)
("Maybe Adrien was her prince." ... Wow. What is this strange feeling growing inside of me? Like if I wanted to open a window and fangirlscreaming my joy to my entire neighborhood?)
Wow. I can't.
I would like to speak about the adorable dynamic between Plagg and Adrien, or about the kindness Adrien showing to Marinette just now. It's so much Chat Noir-like... or, is it this kindness always been Adrien's, but he only has been able to express it as Chat Noir yet? (aouch, calm down my bad English, calm down for the sake of the autor you're miserably trying to worship...)
But I can't. I can't because your ending just took me by surprise, and in French I would like to use the poetic expression "J'en tombe des nues".
Well, it's like I has been hurt by a truck, basically.
Gotta go, I need to know what will happen after this "unmistakable sound of a cat's purr". Damnit.
| Elenthya chapter 5 . 12/18/2017
About your ending Note
I totally agree with your Tikki/Plagg way of shipping. They complete each other, just as Chat Noir and Ladybug.
now for this chapter...
Here we go. The "You like Ladybug, not me" time - well, I think so, because we can't really know what is exactly happening in Marinette's mind. (and this is why your story is interesting. Juste one POV, for now.)
Does she thinks the interest Chat Noir have for Marinette is just a consequence of their LadyNoir bound? It's understandable, they are only fourteen or fifteen, they are searching for who they are, who they will be. To be a superhero in this situation, to wear masks as you said it very right there, it must be difficult.
But, even if Chat Noir love Marinette because she IS Ladybug, because she moves like her, smells like her...
And so, what?
This is why the pairings are so interesting in this show - in my opinion. The secret protect them as much as it disturbs and hurts them. It would easy to think that a reveal would makes everything get better... but would it be,really?
Chat Noir has been rejected, coldly, badly.
Why does I think this can lead to an "Chat Blanc" moment? Of an akumatised Marinette - is it even possible...
Well, see ya!