Esta bueno

Good chapter and very vivid description. I would've made Chocho get more into it at the end and maybe touch herself while watching that ending but nice overall.

the addition of unrealistic ships having very significant affects in the storyline really draws me off.. just shouldve kept it narusara.

Sumire
e insisto en Hanabi Sakura (cuando este lista) Shion Shizuka (de Nadesko) y quien sabe quizás puedas poner a Moegui
Y en un futuro o salto de tiempo a Himawari; después de todo ya vio que no es ilegal gracias a su madre y quiere hacer feliz a su padre
Hay que revivir al clan Uzumaki; quizás a Karin, nunca vi el sentido de que siguiera sintiendo algo por "sas uke cun" cuando la trato de matar después de todas las veces que lo salvo

Por que no incluir a Hanabi para Naruto? Seria genial que tuvieran una hija
También Sakura podría darse una oportunidad con el con el apoyo de Sarada
E Himawari podría tomar lo que paso con su madre y hermano para decidirse hacer algo con su padre
Asta Shion podría al enterarse del divorcio y las circunstancias de ello

Well that's went good

Wtf

When will you update this great story again?

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

R-Kelly music begins to play lmaoXD

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

I’ll never stop re reading your story. Hope you update soon!

Thisno main girl" part was the only part I didn't like it. the main girl should be sarada, she truly loves Naruto for years, chocho only have a crush on him (if she fall in love with him it's less then a week because what made her feel more like this was that scene) like the majority of the village but I understand, this is a harem fanfiction.

it's the gender thing again, if it's an older woman they're okay with it but if it's an older man they'll be gross out

I think its either tenten, sakura, or hanabi.