Reviews for A Sinful Romance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh so sweet... |
![]() ![]() Only one was awesom! But good try! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute chapter! I like the Griamore and Veronica pairing! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm dying for Excanor x Merlin! continue please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! Very cute! :D |
![]() ![]() This is fabulotastic! Moreee pleaassee i love Meliodas X Elizabethhhh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute chapter! It was fun to read! Though I think the story would flow better if you took out the the bold names part before the paragraphs. I don't think they are really needed and sometimes distract from the story. Most of the time you can even just use the name instead of saying, for example "she mumbled" and instead use "Elizabeth mumbled". That one may even be a case where you don't even need Elizabeth's name since it's just Meliodas and her in the scene. Other then that little thing, it was a good chapter! I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE THE TITLE YO. I love the idea of Meliodas reading fairy tales to Elizabeth! Which makes sense when you think about it; he's an old man to her, literally. Very nicely written and I hope to see more soon! |