Oh wow! I was kind of ambivalent to the Hermione/Neville pairing before this, but now, I totally ship it. Though I'm not sure that I can find another fic of this ship with the standards you set. Fear not of me missing the best bits, I did read it on AO3. I'm glad you kept this on because I don't have an AO3 account to review with (yet) and I like to keep my fics list in one spot.
May the muses favor you,
Kip
...hmmmm... I would not be adverse to more embarrassment of others due to sexual exploits, especially the dense duo listening to their wives rib Hermione.
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- because recomending a fic and providing inspiration kills two birds with one stone.

Great story. I read both of your editions.

Great story.

Annoyed that this is an M rated story but does t contain any actual sex scenes! You need to change it to a T rating.

You *are* an amazing writer.

I just finished this on AO3 and I love it! You ate an amazing writer and I love all your stories.

Just finished reading this on the other site as you recommended. I have to say that I am truly in awe of your brilliance as a writer, your extraordinary imagination, and the amount of research you so clearly did. Hermione and Neville are beyond fabulous together! The fact that you have a solid plot and the ability to write intimate scenes with such heat is amazing. Many writers can do one or the other, but precious few can manage both. Well done!

Maybe it's because I'm reading this here~ where it's almost all filtered out and acceptable for everyone under 16 years of age, regardless of the bold M rating, but I didn't really feel this book. Don't get me wrong, the writing was exceptional, the characters were a bit OOC (Especially Hermione) but they were well written and had very human traits, which is always welcome. However, and this is a very subjective opinion, exclusive only to me, I did not really enjoy this book as much as I wanted to. In fact... I found it quite boring. If I had to represent this book in a graph form it would just be a straight horizontal line. Straight. A singular level of excitement. Quite boring. Maybe I will give the Live Journal version a chance some day, but for today I think I need to immediately go read something else for an instant pick me up. Thank you regardless, for your time and efforts. I apologise I could not enjoy it as much as you may hoped all your readers to.

Haven't even read a word of the story yet but you had me at "threatened to be reported". Every time I hear of a (almost) banned piece of literature, I must read it! So excited to start this new journey!

sequel!

I just finished reading this on ao3 and gods it was amazing. An over looked Hermione is a force to be reckoned with.

THIS! I have absolutely no words except, I need a glass of water... right now! HOOOOOTTTT! #Respectisrare

Oh my. Just finished this on Ao3 and where on earth has dominant Neville been all my life? I need more. Love, love, LOVE. Thank you.

actually went over to ao3 because this story was so good and I finished it in one day! it was phenomenal! hardly ever get to read well-written stories with Neville/Hermione. well done!

just finished this on ao3...it was awesome!