Her hero name should've been redshirt

Honestly, I love the rendition of Armsmaster in this fic. And the reveal at the end of this chapter only makes things better hahahaha

This story was good, but there are a few unresolved plot points which are quite annoying.

Firstly, what happened to Taylor after she saved Sophia to make it so her wounds were all mysteriously in slightly different places?

Secondly, how did Alabaster die, and why was it blamed on Taylor?

It seems like Taylor forgot her initial reason for not joining the Wards. That being the fact that they probably would restrict the use of her power a lot, not wanting to send her to die over and over again.

loved that ending, actor Steven Fry said he used to do that to bullies in boarding school, "oh oh stop hitting you're giving me an erection.'

Just want you to know that even if you never update, I love your work and am so grateful that you wrote it.
This fic is a fantastic ride, and I'll definitely reread it at some point. All the best!

The fight was fine, but you still never justified what happened with her insanely high percentage from Grue etc. Why would she waste that back to zero and not hold onto it?

What happened to her 50%? Rainy day fund?

It feels really hand-wavey to let Grue's darkness completely fuck Taylor over . . .

Wow that was shitty of them. Bad Wards.

Nice story, will be checking to see if it was continued in a moment. It isn't such a good idea to have someone reset by suicide but that is a valid power. Up to this point has been a very good story and I like the Mentor Armsmaster you have going right now. One of the few I have read that works. Thank you for the great read.

can't wait to read the next few chapters, was worried for ya then I read your notes.. stuff happens all the time, just make sure that you are doing okay first and then deal with the problems that is happening right then and there. Anyways keep up what you like doing author, I owe ya a shelf.

If this ever gets updated I'll be on this story like Zion on a cure for atrophy...

i require moar.

this was fun to read though. i dont know if youre actually alive but if you are good job on this man

Interesting story, though I kind of agree with this last author’s note. This most recent chapter came out of left field. I like the idea of Veronica, but jumping into her doing stuff unrelated to everything else that’s happened in the story so far several weeks after the previous chapter is weird.