Man what a thrill to make the reader be genuinely scared of the actions naruto takes against another character with the slow build up and all the small tells we can gain insight to because of your world building ... Idk man i am not making grammatically sound sense but thisss this is amazing

What happened to sasuke was so heart breaking

Sigh you are making kushina dumb and desperate i mean i guess it makes sense but it's really hard that a shinobi of her caliber has not had a single straight thought and literally everyone just looks the other way instead of calling her out on it until naruto does

Okie so while i have been in full awe of the fic and your ingenious planning, i must say i find the hokage to be a little ... Too contempt, like the situation is political yes but the hokage has shown multiple times to interfere in clan matters , him suddenly staying out of this one is a bit... Out of character

I love this fic, like you have the guys to take veryyyy Canon things and screw them in a way that perfectly matches the story and for some reason it works like this is genius level writing omg i love it heheh

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Huh i almost thought Kakashi was a typo at the end but now i see we are going for the super unhinged hatake with over protectiveness that rivals kushina

Your mind is wicked my friend and i love it

That right there was a genius way to give an op power to sb and make it fun to understand and not over used great job

Oh thank god you didn't make kushina dumb enough to have forgotten about the whole seal thing for the entire trip. This makes a lot more sense

I am finally depressed enough to vibe with this story let's go yayy

best fanfiction I've ever read

FUCK YEAH!

From when this story first started reading when i was 16ish to now 24. I have gone through an incredible amount of change. Love, loss, adiction, becoming a father, furthering a career, etc. I have to say finally finding my joy of reading again and returning to finish this story from the beginning, it is one of my favorites. Following releases silently over time and coming back to see the progression of your writing style, subtle tone changes even, to how everything wrapped up. Bravo!

Also he wants to side with he wrong wide in the Kiri conflict? He wants to side with the side that is killing kids born with blood line limits? So now heis also a child killer? why not just have him kill his own wolves then since they are his children apparently.