Author projecting his pedo vibes and hid it by saying it is some sorta deal, after all why would she offer to fuck a kid? instead of something else

Great as always

also dammit, the chapters named the curse of chains but there's absolutely nothing about it other than the fact that it is unexpectedly active and not harmful

the wolves are gonna unionize but instead of dethroning their leader they're just gonna make him stay with them, lol

Good

you write about naruto having a lot of work to much, either resolve the issue or stop using it every single time you can't think of what to write

This story started great and the works cities to develop well... but there really hasn't been any character growth in one million words. Early on, it started that Naruto would (had) grow as a character, but then he regressed and has remained there ever since. There has been absolutely no personal growth.

This story is good, but with some actual development of Naruto it would be exceptional.

Thanks for writing.

Not sure why I cheered when Tsukiyomi said he was proud of Hana, but I cheered out loud

Informative but had to have a new chapter. Keep it up.

Another interesting chapter

Fantastic Chapter. I wonder how Iroh will view Asuma's blunt move in getting the wolves to leave (on their terms, yes, but still leave).

very super

Rebellious daughter Hana is a nice addition to the Fandom. Also can't wait for Orochi to switch bodies... or perhaps Mikoto drops by for a visit. Tsukuyomi needs his smothering.

The chapter was great, didn't expect the part with Iroh, but I quite liked that part. The ending was surprising with the whole flag business. Tsunades teasing of Shizune was just great, one of the best parts, with the one with Hana. That was the part I enjoyed the most, with sad part is that we will not see more interaction between Hana and Naruto now, with her coming vacation. But I hope we will at least see parts of that vacation and more interaction between Naruto and Sai.

fun chapteR.
But a shame naruto was finally not tied.
Would like to have some smut involving a tied and even gagged naruto with a female playing the bit sadistic dominatrix and having fun with his body.