Shitty writing. This shit with Tsume is making no sense.

Shitty writing that Kisame ain’t dead and just chilling in Wave

Shitty writing that Naruto couldn’t slaughter Zabuza

Honestly, I like kakashis near-psychopathic tendencies. He's exactly how I would picture and grizzled ninja who's accepted how much of a monster he is. It's pretty amusing.

Love Danzo in this story. Whish
he was the wolves great grandpa

Praying on Sakura’s death still. Are all these new girls gonna be a copy of Anko?

Praying on Sakuras death next

Once more praying Tayuya dies

Praying on Tayuyas death

I really hate Tayuya. She is trash and a bitch. I really struggled reading through this chapter because of her

Oooof, so finally read through it all.
And it's excellent in every are except... yes, except sorry t rain on your parade in the last few miles.

It just hit me the last chapters, or something, you fell into the bad ol'e 'show, don't tell' trap. You described and told and wrote more and more and showed less and less and while it is (somewhat) interesting to get the whole motivation, thought process, etc, of a person... it's, well it's called 'show, don't tell' for a reason.
It hit me as Orochimaru got the letter from Jirobo. A short scoff of Oro at the form of the letter with some thoughts of how he killed sub-leaders for less, show the concern about its content, show the content (the four words in three sentences) nd then show Orochimaru getting out like a bat outta hell.

And, goals change, some can be adjusted and some *grins* some get an ending, an alternate ending and omake endings.

So long,
Love and peace

Me gusta el capítulo, ya es hora de acabar con esos monstruos y pasar a la guerra

I could look over all the contrived plot of inexplicably incompetent people but I can’t keep reading this when it keeps acting like an 8-10 is the sexiest thing to walk in the village. It’s creepy how half the time a women sees him a prepubescent child they think” oh this is the appropriate time to make overtly sexual innuendo and physical actions” it’s bad writing and makes every woman in this story look like a pedophile and dumb as bricks.

Not even to mention how literally no one gives a fuck about civilians dying in a ninja village or what on all accounts would be a suspect to murder.

There were some intriguing ideas especially with the kyuubi but there is to much contrivance and the same “I’ll wait until they come to me” every person is to passive.

oh good, another person to prideful to admit they are wrong but conveniently realizes it the second after the conversation is over. what a new plot point, we definitely haven't seen that one before.

I'm not sure if the story has just taken a real downturn recently or if the author is only now letting us know the consequences of basically everything that's happened in the last 69 chapters because it seems like everything is just going wrong, and now apparently the "Chakra withdrawal" that gave Naruto his inky dark Chakra color has also apparently crippled him for life. good that just never really got covered in detail for what, 60 chapters? sure it was sorta implied his development was stunted a bit but it was never really talked about in detail.