I really enjoy this fic with how you are developing Naruto is quite nice and this last bit with Orochimaru was my favorite part for some reason i just enjoyed how read.

oh that's ominous. I look forward to the next chapter.

Orochimaru has an interest in naruto for the curse seal this will not end well and naruto can use chains like his mother wonder how she will feel about that when she comes back ad will naruto eve want her training after the three years are up ad I wonder what weapon you have planned for naruto to use keep up the good work.

So an entire year has passed now. Naruto steadily improves his skills, and also steadily falls deeper in the Kyuubi's clutches. Though I wonder if that tear from her was in victory... or regret? Either way, Tsunade's past vices get her back in a bad way, and neither she or Kurenai can find him. Didn't think that plan would work.

Another thing I didn't think of was that last line. Rather than Jiraiya, Naruto's godfather is OROCHIMARU?! Holy crap! I could see why something like that would be kept under wraps, but with the snake now choosing to make a step into Naruto's life, I can only imagine the result. Can't wait to see it.

Post soon!

Whoa godfather Orochimaru haven't seen this before now I'm even more interested great work

PLOT TWIST. Huh so is Orochimaru gonna still be the same as cannon or not

I like this chapter..
You really don't see alot of godfather Orochimaru.

PL-PL-PLOT TWIST!

Please tell us that when they return, Kushina has her ass kicked so bad she is put in the hospital.

First of all, good chapter as well, I've taken to bookmarking this story as it's pretty.. original as far as the content and how the story progress goes. It strikes me as odd that people seem to prefer to do nothing and just hope for something to occur. But then again, I suppose even if they approached Naruto, he probably would not want their help as it might be mistaken for pity. That being said, I'm liking where the interaction with Kyuubi and Naruto are going. Kushina's decision to continue the trip is gonna bite her in the ass, that much is most likely. Regardless, keep up the good work and uh.. I'll look forward to any new chapters that come along the way.

this is a interesting story i like it.

damn lucky bastard

Looking forward to the next chapter

Too many similies and descriptions of things you've already said. Also no one on the planet talks like your characters do, it's like they're in a shakesperian play and it's very annoying, but if that's what you were going for then... Good job I guess... Otherwise it's a good story.

It's starting to get a bit boring and repetitive... Please change the pace and direction of this otherwise wonderfully different and refreshing story.
And please make this story a no forgiveness story.
I am honestly bored to death of those forgiving naruto type stories..