Review of chapter 4: Great chapter. I loved how naruto acted around shizune and how shizune interacted with him. I also liked how iruka noticed the behaviour of naruto.

Wow Kushina is way to trusting in her plans can't wait until Kushina and Naruko return to Konoha and find out Mark to moved on without them. I also liked how you made it out to where anyone who could help him except Hiruzen and Kakashi practically put it off or try to pin the blame somewhere else while trying to help him as well keep up the good work

I smell a time skip soon.

What plan is Kushina taking abaut, she just pack up and left, she is trusting other to do her job for her... Oh boy is she going to be disappointed.

Damn so kushina found out the truth yet doesn't even want to return
Kushina should at least try to link his chakra to the matrix or make a seal that can bypass the seal at the house
Wow everyone is lagging it to help naruto like what the fuck is up with that
Can mikoto help him I hope she does
Maybe she can join narutos harem
Hopefully mikoto comes to the rescue
Please continue
Can't wait for more

It seems the Kyuubi's plan is working in replacing herself i place of his mother and sister. Wonder if Kushina will ever realize the damage that her action have caused to her son and her relationship with them and will naruto ever be able to not think i a mentality that fits only in war. keep up the good work.

Good make more chapters i really like how Naruto thinks of the sun and stars

good

Just a question, and in no way am I attempting to influence you on the story, but are you going to do a time skip? Because while they're good at skipping past a whole load of boring years that most authors don't keep interesting enough to read through (Although I am hoping you can), it does create some dissonance in the two timelines in terms of characters.

That's a recurring theme in the Naruto fandom on this site, starting young, then time skipping to academy graduation, but you miss all the important parts in between, and the two Narutos of the story don't seem to be the same person.

The same problem occurs with the opposite, authors who drag the childhood on for too long. The story becomes stagnant and usually they can't link the past situation to the future Naruto they envisioned.

I'm sure you'll get through this masterfully, but it's just a small concern I have, especially as I see a lot of potential in this story, and I would like to see it reach the 'good' section of this site, amongst the 99% 'less-than-good'.

I'm probably rambling and you've likely already considered this, but in case you didn't, here's a reminder ;).

Anyway though, great chapter, spectacular work as usual.

so he really is suffering do to misunderstandings and lack of initiative on the part of those around him. all of them actually want to help and his family do care, but for various reasons don't or simply had a brain fart as it were.
all in all another good chapter. obviously though something needs to be dealt with by kushina and daughter. something dangerous either to her or naruto. if it were not so, then he would have been brought along. still he really is stiff and not at all like the rest of his family. I it would interesting to see how that developed. after all he wasn't treated badly at all. if it's a case of his study habbits then clearly he would recognize hiruzen as hokage and not simply leader of the sarutobi clan. it bothers me more than it should. perhaps someone should break him from said habit.
anyway, I look forward to the next chapter as always.

THE TRAP IS WORKING MITO! SOON. SOON IT ALL WILL COME TOGETHER

Another great chapter, truly bravo, this has been a great read to this point and I hope to see it continue. Will be interesting to see how he reacts to meeting Naruko and Kushina again...i'm assuming that won't be for a long time however. At this pace, I don't know if we will see it in 2 or 10 chapters either way I can't wait for it.

awesome story i wonder how kushina will react now an what will she do when she meets him again

Kushina still shouldn't off left with out telling Naruto

So much detail, and the iner reflexions are great.

My God, so much angst and depression so many feels... It's awesome.

I can see Kushina as a hot headed, act first, think never, consequences be dammed kind of knucklehead.

Like the portrait of Kurenai at the end.

Keep it up.