Reviews for Sealkeeper: He Who Binds |
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PR1M0RD1AL chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 The story description was very misleading |
How to change avatar chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 Too young to know what sex is, way too young for puberty to have kicked in. |
M.D. Hurricane chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 Hm, I wonder if Naruto will make a habit of making deals. |
ncpfan chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 Very promising start to this one. I find myself wondering if what happened really is what it seems, and Kushina and Naruko just abandoned Naruto and left him to completely fend for himself without the benefit of a home to return to - or if there's more to the story. Given that Naruto thought the world of his mother and sister, he must have felt loved by them, and Kushina, having been the former jinchuriki, certainly wouldn't think that Naruto's the demon. So I find myself wondering if there isn't more to this... Eagerly awaiting more, especially to see what Kushina, Naruko and Kurenai are up to. |
The Sun's Cradle chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 I require more! MORE STORY! *smashes mug on the floor* Another! |
iitrnr chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 The idea's interesting. But you could have made the narrative a bit tighter. The Hokage comes to see him at the hospital, knows that he has a strange seal on him, and still doesn't have anyone watching him? Doesn't care to provide food and accommodation to someone potentially important? When he already knows that Naruto has nowhere to go? Readers are usually willing to go along with unlikely story lines as long as the story is entertaining. Same in this case. But doesn't mean that you couldn't try to make the story more believable. Anyway, hope to see more soon. Thanks. |
blazenite104 chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 interesting idea. not entirely sure what is happening other than the obvious connection to kyuubi and even his family doesn't like him thing, but i'm sure it'll make more sense down the road. |
james0117 chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 Damn you gone for years and it's a new story we get well at least it's something great idea and a good concept for sure can wait to see how this pans out |