OH SHIIIIT IS AEDAN A REAVER?
HOWE AND HIS MEN ARE FUUUUUUUCKED.

SPIT THOSE FACTS AT THOSE BASTARDS. I CAN'T WAIT FOR HOWE TO GET HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

A lovely short chapter. Soon the confrontation between Leliana and MarjaBITCH will occur. How will this play out. How will Alistair fair.

HAAAAAA This chapter was brilliant. Oh silly Alistair he's a stronger man then me. Also Zeveran at the end was perfect too. Best Wingman.

Also finally made a new Warden for Alistair. Her name is Madison Cousland. But after the attack at Highever she uses the name Lydia to hide her identity. But she keeps her mother's hairstyle in remembrance of her family, as well as keeping her family blade.

She's a Warrior who specializes in Duel-wielding and Sword and Shield. She prefers Medium armor-Heavy armor.

I love these two so much. Good move Alistair.
And
DAAAAAAAAW THEY'RE TOO CUTE.

OH OF COURSE. Oh poor Aedan. Wynne better better not do a "I told you so" or so help me. Also Zev buddy please behave.

Hi. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. Life sucks almost as much as the Blight.

Been loving the last few chapters. You're integration of Gimili's lines with Oghren fit well. Seeing Alistair and Leliana finally kiss was sooo good. And I love how Leliana just looooves to tease him.

But Aedan. Poor Aedan, I remember my first Cousland playthrough feeling the hopelessness and anger. It's why every Warrior Cousland I ever make will Always have the Rage Feat. And you had to add the bitter bite of Morrigan breaking up with him, damn. Hopefully things get better for the young man

MY SWEET BABY BOOOOOOY

THAT'S IT
NEW ORIGINS PLAYTHROUGH

GONNA GIVE THIS SAD PUPPY A BEST FRIEND OR FUTURE WIFE TONIGHT

WE'LL SEE.

I love them
I loveeeee Theeeeeem

I FUCKING LOVE THEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMMM

LELISTAIR FOR THE WIIIIIIIIIN.

I feel in love with the idea of this ship after the Darkspawn Chronicles.

Also HOLY KNICKERS I love how you incorporate the in-game dialogue and make it flow naturally between them.

Also Uncle Og at it again.

MY OWN CHEESE LOVING HEART NEARLY MELTED THERE.
Good ole' Leliana.

ALISTAIR DESERVES THE WORLD. I LOVE THIS SERIES.

TAKE THAT MORRIGAN AND ISOLDE.

Hey pal, I just did this whole story in 2 days. It was really good! Congrats on your achievement, well written so it went down like water. I also loved how you went full kek for chapter 100.

It is as you say. When you read a nice piece (or consume any sort of art really...) it enthralls you. You spend time under its influence, which progressively wanes until you are left with a little match's lighting out of the whole campfire, which you carry until death. And someday I, and that day will likely never come, will do the ground apple joke. Yes, that shall persevere in my armoury.

I am also sure that I will remember your Lelistair fix every now and then. Thanks for the ride!

You're welcome!

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I was originally just going to pick this chapter to review because it's 69, but that would just be crass, wouldn't it? I do love how they actually make each other better people, they learn from each other and teach each other, it's quite a sight. Beautifully done

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