Reviews for Uncertain Demise
TimelessXxX chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
AER YOU KIDDING? CREEPED OUT? I WAS FRICKING SCARED! NO! SQUALLIE'S DEAD! loved the ring around the rosy part, didn't really get it until you explained it, but it was CREEPY!
QTrepe432 chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
wow this story totally creeped me out! It didn't help to read it at night when everyone in my house is asleep. Totally loved it though. It puts a new perspective on the ring around the rosy game. I'll probabbly never play it again in my life. Very scary crap here. hehe LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!
Kunoichi chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Very creepy.

Great story.

Keep up the good work Mai.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
why did squall have to dead! its not fair ! loved the story though you should make a second chapter, dont end it there
Majin Jin chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
*shivvers* ur an evil author *slaps said author*
Mistal chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
hehehe Im fucked, for some fucked up reason that was kinda sweet...this jsut show how not normal i am, anyway, nice story


animegirl171 chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
O okie that was creepy haha but ti great
Saya chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
o.O *still didin't recovered from shock as reading the last words: Because I'm alredy dead*


you are a really good writer!
Sanguinary Lilith chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
So. did I creep you out. yes? no?
Idril Ancalimon chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Heeeya Mai, this is such a creepy story! It's kinda freaky how Squall gets the rings. Lol, but I kinda got confused, how Squall ended up with Seifer so fast. But, it's still a good fic. Keep up the good work!

Lotsa lurve,

Koroshite chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Woah, that did sorta creep me out, but it made me sad too, knowing Squall was gonna die and Seifer was gonna lose him...Creepy and sad, sounds like me! (most of the time, but always creepy)

Vash's Girl chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Well, at least someone knows about the ring around the posie thing o And that the Black Plague still exists, even in America -_-o

Other than that, it's a great story so far! Kinda creepy...*Gets the creeps easily* Very good! I hope you continue soon! Please do! Onegai!


you know who this is chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
totally freaky, dude! I love Ghost, just as much as I love Jeremy! woohoo!
charmedalmasy chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
creepy but i do wanna see what else happens.
Curious chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
This was great! But I'd love to have known Seifer's reaction. Keep up the good work!
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