Ripping my nails out would've been less painful than reading this. But I guess that's just cause it was so well written.

It’s sad, but the ending made up for all the sad deaths that made me want to grab a knife or hammer and stab the screen

Absolutely amazing!

omg so good and depressing i love it so much

...what the hell was that? How could someone make Percy's centuries of life in a few sentences, though, you did good work.

Well written, but the ending is too ambiguous and I can’t really imagine something like this happening.

this was amazing bro

Why! I’m crying so hard

That is good, but it’s kinda not Percy.

This is the saddest thing about Percy Jackson I've ever read and I've read the ending of Mark of Athena and the beginning of House of Hades

not me literally crying

This was the best idea ,in my informed opinion, from a fellow pjo/hoo fan I have ever heard of. Thank you for bringing wonder as well as a beautifully tragic and brutal possible outcome to your readers.

An what is it they say.

“You either die a hero or live longe enough to see yourself become the villain”

Well I guess it should be.

You either die a hero, live long enough to see yourself in become the villain or live forever and turn cold and emotionless.

I really liked it.

I love those sad stories about immortals.

I saw screenshots of the story on Pinterest and spent like two hours tracking it down.

Bruhh this is the saddest thing I’ve read.

holy shit...I'm fucking speechless...I honestly don't know what to say. I've loved the Percy Jackson series since middle school and I've never really considered the darker versions of Percy because usually he's ridiculously goofy I forget how powerful he is. This was incredibly moving and heartbreaking wow