Reviews for Deadly Love
EdTheBeast chapter 2 . 4/18
An intriguing short story!
gginsc chapter 2 . 2/6
Not bad. I wish it was longer.
Hadami chapter 2 . 10/28/2020
Another chapter would be nice. Thanks.
stevem1 chapter 2 . 6/3/2020
This is a great premise. There are some flaws (like being in a muggle morgue as a murder victim means you’re likely to be cut open for an autopsy), but I think it’s a great start to a larger story.

The Davis family makes the Gaunts look normal.
MonsterRideOp chapter 2 . 11/15/2019
Your story has a good start and an interesting set of ideas. I like the house elf idea and love the idea of "everyone is truly free in America."
Would love to see this continued. The seed has been planted but what happens differently in the later years? That said it does hold up on its own as a two-shot.
I would ignore the last review. They say on their profile that they leave "scathing" reviews. That wasn't scathing it was downright hostile so just ignore it and keep on writing.
SomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
Maybe change your name to TheGirlWithTheFuckingRetardedIdeas

No, no, I know.


You inbred fucking ape of a human being. How have you survived as a human being this stupid? Seriously, it must be nearly impossible to live being as brain dead as you must be.

Hank1967 chapter 2 . 3/28/2019
You have the beginnings of a potentially really neat story. I like how you set things up with Harry and Tracy. I hope you re-visit this some day and expand on it.
RealSaberwolf chapter 2 . 2/28/2019
Great story. Loved the Harry/Tracey pairing. Nice concept though quite dark... I LIKE IT!
Will there be follow up chapters? Perhaps an epilogue chapter?
Still a great two-shot! Props from me :D
themadmartian chapter 2 . 2/6/2019
Very well done !

tricorvus chapter 2 . 12/29/2018
That was truly wonderful
tricorvus chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
My goodness that was good writing
Rock on
Netchka chapter 2 . 11/15/2018
More please! More please! I really, really wanna read more please! I can't wait to find out what happens.
Lindela chapter 2 . 9/22/2018
Loved it. Any chance of a sequel?
Pygmy Hippo chapter 2 . 6/19/2018
Amazing story! So creative! I love it :D
ak chapter 2 . 4/29/2018
bonne fic!
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