Reviews for Holiday Hotel
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2016
This is so cute! Please tell me you are continuing! I absolutely love this story!
Tuti chapter 2 . 3/25/2016
I always like your Edward and Bella's, and these ones make me laugh.
Also it has been a while since I read something so romantic, I absolutely love it :D
Update soon xxx
Bakergrama chapter 2 . 3/14/2016
Love the beginning of this story..please continue..thanks!
sassy973 chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Loved it hope you update soon.
xoHunnyxBunnyxo chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
Cute story, will you be writing more?
Y-knott chapter 2 . 1/17/2016
Cute story, I hope you continue. :-)
jennayg123 chapter 2 . 1/16/2016
Just loving this story so far! Can't wait for more!
cjrich chapter 2 . 1/11/2016
Love this story line. Can see Bella as a dark haired Doris Day, HaHa. Edward, Cary Grant or Clark Gable. Just plain enjoying this. Can't wait to see where you take this. XOXO,Cheri
Guest chapter 2 . 12/31/2015
Too many lazy errors and wrong word usage. It's clear you don't research anything or use a damn dictionary. And if you're going to write from another time period, then skip the current slang.
Rebadams7 chapter 2 . 1/1/2016
It might be the start of something beautiful
R
nix69 chapter 2 . 12/29/2015
I seriously cannot wait for more of this story. I absolutely love the movies and actors from that era and it just takes me back to watching them all. I hope that Edward's motives are real and that he isn't still the womaniser Jacob and Garrett say he is? Bring on the next chapter! Please?
Nissa-Cullen chapter 2 . 12/25/2015
I'm liking this so far. Edward is quite the player lol. Poor Garrett needs to find himself a woman who sees him for himself. Poor Alice just needs a woman's role and Jasper will see her as who she is. I can't wait to see how they all end up.
bonz245 chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
I love the old Hollywood movies too. I'm going to enjoy this one.
roxiegirl chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
Sweet! Edward certainly is forward! Love it.
EBLoveSong chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
Awwwww! I absolutely loved these chapters so far. I cannot wait to see what happens next! You will continue this right? Please do! It has a lot of potential, I can see this becoming such an amazing love story.
I really love your writing skills, I'm a HUGE fan of "The Squad" ;)

- Ally
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