|Reviews for Addendum|
| Marlaina Shade chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
aw...that's so sad! *hugs David* lol...but very well done; you truly captured David's character. *beams* he's one of my two fave newsies...the other being jack, of course. anyhow, happy writing, and job well done!
| deleted account 2257 chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
"They don't know grammar"
that made me laugh cause it reminded me of you. ahahhaha.
I LOVE YOU THIS WAS GOOD. Even though I don't like David ;).
| Crunch chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Wow, this is a wonderful story. I know what you mean, David isn't my favorite character, but he is a fascinating subject, and so underwritten. It's very nice to see a story that does him justice. This is very well written, the characterization is right on, and well, I just love it. Kudos.
hanging on yer every word,
| Mush's Skittles chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
I like! Very nice. You got David's character really well. I think though, that education is not enough, but neither is just street life. Not like I would know in this, America 2003, Land of the Pampered, Overweight, TV and Media-ed out, Middle Class . :) I'm fully taken care of so I have no grounds to argue on.
Well written, it made me think :)
| accountdeleted234 chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
I LOVE this! It's so fabulous. :) (Even though David was like, my least favorite characters...)
It gives you amazing insight into David's character, and it's fantastically written.
You've done it again!
| Ann Valentine chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
*random* David Moscow is in a new movie and I'm going to see it this weekend YAY! _
But anyway, this was great. I loved how you characterized Davey - I could totally see it. It's true that words fail you at the totally least convienient time. Anyway, great job!
| Skywise chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
This is a nice bit of writing. It's a fairly unexploreed subject in this fandom and it's nice to get a breath of something different. Keep up the good work!