| Reviews for Furuichi's Demonic Adventure |
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  jose de la torre chapter 22 . 12/13/2019 he leido tu otro trabajo de esta historia , es muy bueno , pero no tambueno como este , espero que sigas continuandolo |
 ShadowFictionX chapter 22 . 9/3/2019 Hello! First of all, I loved your story so much that I read it in one day. You definitely have talent for this. From what I read, among the chapters, there were paragraphs that, to my liking, were unnecessary. I loved the interactions Furuichi had with the other characters, but I don't like it when you go so deeper into Furuichi's subconscious. I get that you need explanations to make understand at the reader about the changes on Furuichi, but were many explanations that you could summarize in a better way, but I am sure that in the future that will already be clear to you. I loved the character development of Furuichi and above all that his line of thinking and way of acting was not 'altered' without a good reason behind. Many times, people that write just 'change the character' without any reason or justification, which bothers me a lot in many FanFicts. Personally, I don't recommend rewriting this FanFic. It would be too much work to raise all points again. I recommend you continue writing this same story, even if you feel a little dissatisfied at the beginning, and just write more and improve more. If you feel capable, ignore this opinion of mine, but from what I have been able to see on this page, every time someone tries to rewrite his FanFic, it ends up abandoning it due to the enormous work it takes. I hope that doesn't happen to you. Until the next Chapter! |
| PieKnight chapter 22 . 8/7/2019 After just finding this story today and finishing it. I'm really looking forward to the rewrite! |
| CRUDEN chapter 22 . 4/14/2019 A bit of a shame that your starting over, it was a really fun ride and I was fully enjoying xenovia and furuichi blossoming relationship |
| Jarjaxle chapter 22 . 4/13/2019 i hope furuichi's harem ( still hope nene is in it) stays same tough xenovia...hmm ise or furuichi..tough choice |
| ninjafox911 chapter 22 . 4/13/2019 you bully, ughhhh.. . .. Fine, have it your way. |
| ninjafox911 chapter 21 . 4/6/2019 Is this dead? |
| 2 chapter 14 . 10/3/2018 hey , no pressure but i want to know when you will continue ? |
| Carlluigi Marcaida chapter 20 . 7/22/2018 Still waiting for the new chapter Plss i interested in your story |
| kerrowe chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 Not sure about the state of this fic. But I liked the chapter. Funny. |
| Carol542 chapter 21 . 6/3/2018 Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it |
| Carlluigi Marcaida chapter 21 . 5/31/2018 When will you release the new chapter I love the story |
| sol chapter 21 . 5/2/2018 please please make a new chaper |
| angela chapter 21 . 2/23/2018 where is the next chapperr please |